On Mon, Feb 04, 2008 at 12:43:20PM -0500, Adam Sommer wrote:
> +      <para>
> +      There are several ways to upgrade from one Ubuntu release to another.  
> This section gives an overview of the supported upgrade method.

I would use the word recommended instead of supported.

The rest looks good to me.

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