I'm in agreement with Popeys suggestion for simplified language. Other than that, I think the content/tone of the tutorial is good. We may benefit from applying the new style shown in the SDK/Toolkit documentation - the biggest difference being that we would point to elements of the calculator UI itself, rather than using the static images we currently have.
Instructional Overlays Toolkit Doc: https://docs.google.com/a/canonical.com/document/d/1Ki-b5N2A_R8vkQhGBcY1s_Y-EAooB8j2jrd6NENuUB4/edit?usp=sharing -- https://code.launchpad.net/~ubuntu-calculator-dev/ubuntu-calculator-app/ubuntu-calculator-app-welcome-wizard/+merge/281699 Your team Ubuntu Calculator Developers is subscribed to branch lp:ubuntu-calculator-app. -- Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-touch-coreapps-reviewers Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-touch-coreapps-reviewers More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
