hey thats pretty nifty, definatly getting there. Some of the wording I feel could be changed however, things like 'The Demo mode' could be replaced with: "What you see is a trial version of ubuntu which lets you play with it without installing to see if you like it". The bit about keeping your family safe I feel is a bit alienating too, maybe just leave it as "Keep your computer safe". I like the personalization of your wording a lot, it makes it sound like your computer is a little doggy and your taking care of it by installing ubuntu :P
The why is it free bit doesn't actually explain why it is free. I feel it should be replaced with a small segment about FOSS instead of canonical. I think the line 'Canonical makes money by selling technical support to business users' should be dropped - even thought it is true. Firstly it will make people gawk and think they get no support if they don't pay up or have to pay if they use ubuntu for business. It also looks a bit 'evil'. Maybe putting something like "Canonical is an organisation which provides paid-for technical support for Ubuntu with some of their profits going back into the development of Ubuntu to keep it free" or something like that. I love the 'bliss' cover image :P What a pisser. It would be awesome with a no-smoking sign crossing out the windows logo. It's also good because it *kind of* provides instant recognition that we are talking about OS's / Windows On another note I feel one of the strongest aspects of getting people over to ubuntu is to remain compatible with windows. We need to explicitly say that you can still open all your office documents, connect to windows shares, migrate your e-mail, use MSN, play WMA's, use windows apps, etc. My view is that whoever picks up the leaflet is interested in the knowledge that there are MS alternatives and they must have some inkling to change otherwise they wouldn't read it. Therefore we should provide info and support on switching Regards, On 18/06/07, Chris Rowson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Oh yeah - sorry heres a link > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UKTeam/Leaflets?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=leaflet2_withgraphics_chris_rowson.pdf > > -- > [email protected] > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-uk > https://wiki.kubuntu.org/UKTeam/ > -- Matthew G Larsen > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > +44(0)7739 785 249 -- [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-uk https://wiki.kubuntu.org/UKTeam/
