> Anyway there was an edit conflict so I saved it with the highlighted > conflicts. You can have a look at delete whatever you don't like. >
Whilst I do like the edits, I worry that they make the article seem a little more caustic and technical. The audience I had in mind when writing the article was older folk with little IT experience. Have I been dumbing them down too much do you think? Chris -- [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-uk https://wiki.kubuntu.org/UKTeam/
