On 23/12/11 18:06, Tony Pursell wrote: > Hi Grant > > On 23 December 2011 17:39, Grant Phillips-Sewell > <[email protected]>wrote: > >> On Fri, Dec 23, 2011 at 4:56 PM, Alan Pope <[email protected]> >> wrote: >>> On 22/12/11 21:59, paul sutton wrote: >>>> Yeah, would canonical agree to something like that on the cd wallets ? >>>> >>>> >>> The picasa link didn't work for me so can't see it. >> Sorry about that... I renamed the "folder" in which the image was >> stored. I'm now keeping all Ubuntu-related images here: >> >> >> https://picasaweb.google.com/100100192569274200897/UbuntuImages?authkey=Gv1sRgCPz17P6AkPXE_gE >> >> > Just a couple of observations on the CD wallet. The text beginning 'You > are legally entitled...' could imply, for some people, that you are not > legally entitled to copy and distribute for commercial and business use, > i.e just personal use. > > I would avoid acronyms like 'GUI'. You and I know full well what they > mean, others may not. I would just say 'User Interface'. But even that is > a bit too much like jargon. > > Tony >
Agree with comments, Looks great though, Paul -- -- http://www.zleap.net Join the revolution, switch to Ubuntu http://www.ubuntu.com -- [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-uk https://wiki.ubuntu.com/UKTeam/
