I can't tell because I haven't really looked close enough, but on the front of the brochure is "Ubuntu" in the new Ubuntu font? Should it be for consistency?
Also, under "Join the Community / Get Help: .... should we mention the IRC channels and the relevant server? Granted many won't know what that is but others will. Perhaps with a corresponding link to the wiki on IRC. There seems to be enough room to do it. In the "Connecting to WiFi:" section on the first line there is a misspelling.. networks instead of networs. Section "Thumdrives / Mediaplayers in Ubuntu:" Thumdrives should be spelled Thumbdrives. In the "Do I need to defrag or .... " section.. "nearly no virus" has two issues.. bad english, and virus should be plural. "Nearly no" implies there are viruses (viri?) but then we state that we don't need a scanner.. There should be a better way to state that. Best, Mark Garrow (Scunizi) On Sunday 28 March 2010 12:13:28 pm Jack Deslippe wrote: > Hi Everyone, > > I have put up the source files for our second brochure here: > > http://civet.berkeley.edu/~jdeslip/Ubuntu/ > > Have a look and give me some comments. > > -Jack > -- Ubuntu-us-ca mailing list [email protected] Modify settings or unsubscribe at: https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-us-ca
