This chapter has so much that it has been difficult for me to  
determine what is most important.

On page 105 Ellin wonders whether anyone would be interested in her  
writing. PLEASE continue to write and think about comprehension. When  
I first read Mosaic of Thought, I finally discovered explicit  
instruction for my mini lessons. But as I continued to develop the  
mini lessons, I felt something was missing. I continue to think about  
how to help my students "understand", to become passionate about  
ideas and thinking. This book helps me clarify my thinking, but also  
confirms that I am not alone in my concerns and wonderings. So, thank  
you, Ellin, for soldiering on through a your struggle, though as I  
read, I only see your clarity and humor coming through.

Distinction between students go beyond reporting to explaining their  
thinking.
Comprehension strategies are TOOLS for understanding text.
Essential content distinguished from tools to understand the content,  
ie. graphic organizers, pair share, etc.
The above remind me of the importance of crucial staff development. I  
have been asked to create think alouds for teachers for next year.  
While I am flattered that someone thinks I can even do that task, I  
have serious concerns about it. How will teachers understand the  
thinking behind the lesson? How will they realize the idea that  
students need to use certain tools to come to understanding and not  
as an end? Without the discussion and thinking about what it really  
means to understand, to use comprehension strategies, will the  
lessons be any better than a basal? I feel that much of the lessons  
will be misunderstood especially because I'm not sure I'll get time  
with teachers to talk about my thinking behind the lesson and text  
selected. As a language arts content specialist, staff development is  
my biggest obstacle.

I also question the writing of the lessons themselves. I was asked to  
follow the Schoolwide Enrichment Model to be implemented in grades  
3-5. Every day the read aloud consists of a Book Hook, a think aloud  
that is designed to introduce students to a wide variety and level of  
texts. While that is important, I worry that the lessons will not go  
deep enough with the comprehension strategies. I am fortunate that we  
have a curriculum scope and sequence that is similar to the  
essentials that Ellin mentions. However, that may change next year  
when an outside consultant will be brought in to work with teachers  
and review our current materials. I'm really struggling with doing  
what is most helpful to teachers that will lead to more effective  
comprehension instruction.

The six systems readers use to understand text has huge implications  
for teachers. It can lead to more effective conferencing with  
students if teachers have introduced the language of each system. One  
of our schools focused on fluency this year as a building goal. The  
first grade students made great gains in fluency, but I wonder if  
that came at the cost of comprehension. We did track the fluency, but  
it's difficult to effectively track comprehension at first grade.  
Yes, we do use Rigby, but even that is subject to teacher  
interpretation.

As a district curriculum specialist, I have been told that explaining  
surface structure and deep structure would put most of our primary  
teachers over the edge. Again, it goes back to staff development. If  
teachers could read "To Understand and had the time to discuss the  
ideas, it would help them understand comprehension and would impact  
their teaching.

The pragmatic system would be one area that I would focus on if I had  
a classroom. Too often, I expected my students to write about their  
thinking, rather than giving them the time to DISCUSS their thinking.  
I wanted "accountability." How would I be able to assess students'  
work if I didn't ask them to provide a product? I wish I had come to  
this understanding earlier so I could have spared my students from so  
much writing! While I decreased the writing every year, I still  
didn't give students enough time to talk about their reading.

Carol
K-8 Language Arts Content Specialist
La Grange, Il



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