Hi,
I think this looks really ace, especially the hand drawn diagram (I
hope when you say "redone" you don't mean "done with straight boring
lines in illustrator" ;)) I think some more space between the five
text columns would be good, too. I'd maybe push the get it/see it/...
up to align with the top of the Django quote and loose the odd red bar
across the bottom (unless you have something slide-ppy planned for it?).
IMHO this is a huge improvement on your v1 - that really hurt my eyes.
Cheers
Simon
On 14 Apr 2010, at 12:25, James Fisher wrote:
OK, I'm still at the messing-around-in-Inkscape stage, but this is how
things stand (ignore the schema diagram thing, which will obviously be
redone): http://i43.tinypic.com/23wsapl.jpg
Hopefully I'll have quelled some people:
* lighter, less saturated cyan
* cushions obliterated; I quite like the new simple text approach with
extremely ample air around them
* logotype still in Candela, but with the extra padding removed
* sponsor logos removed
* content section widened to full width
Comments?
On Wed, Apr 14, 2010 at 10:30 AM, Julian Moritz <[email protected]
>wrote:
Hi,
David Coallier schrieb:
<snip>
Rest assured no magenta will be introduced :)
I've already lightened the cyan considerably. I don't think it's a
fundamentally toyish colour -- see e.g.
http://www.microsoft.com/windows/windows-7/ palette.
After my harsh criticism of the "couch you'd never buy" earlier,
I've
completely turned face -- I think (hope) I've put it in a visual
context
in
which it's at home.
<snip>
I have to say that the design with the lamp, I quite like :) Sure
I'm
not a designer or anything so my input will be quite limited,
however
even though a bit cyanish it looks quite decent :)
I'm not a designer too and my opinion is not professional one, but
I do
like the design too. The one thing I like more with the old design
was
the sharp font face of the logo. I'm sorry but I can't help: the new
font face is too comic style in my eyes.
regards
julian
