Hi Eugene, thanks for the question, here are my comments:

- Time this newsletter covers: *Let's cover everything done since June*
given that this is the first edition. Moving forward we should focus on
everything that happened since the last newsletter was sent.
- Should this newsletter focus on things only visible to users: No. *let's
not limit input to only things visible to users* for now, if this gets too
long we can add this filter later on.
- Great suggestion on only having the "What" & "Notes" section, this will
keep things slimmer, I removed everything else.

Thanks for asking and giving suggestion to make this better.

G


On 2 October 2017 at 14:49, Eugene Kirpichov <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi Griselda,
>
> Thanks for organizing this! A few questions:
> - What time period shall this newsletter cover? It will be more clear in
> future newsletters, but currently I'm not sure how far back to go in my
> memory :)
> - Should this focus only on things that are visible to users or will be at
> some point? E.g. should items like "There's a discussion going on about
> changing API $X in important way $Y" go into the newsletter?
> - I'm a bit confused with the "what / how / when / notes" format. Seems
> like a simple "What / notes" would be sufficient (1-sentence title +
> elaboration), and I'm not sure what to say about "how" / "when" for some
> things I'd like to mention.
>
>
> On Mon, Oct 2, 2017 at 2:29 PM Griselda Cuevas <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> Hi Beam community,
>>
>> Here's
>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BbpQne-9ng93G-_-UKH2C4UNafcEQcLALtu38qsXfI8/edit>
>> the template for the October Newsletter.
>>
>> *Add the updates you want to share with the community by 10/6 11:59 p.m.
>> Pacific Time - I'm in SF :)*
>>
>> I'll edit and send the final version through the users mailing list on
>> 10/9.
>>
>> Thank you!
>> G
>>
>

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