Hi, what do you think it confusing in it, I would love to hear your option.

Regards,
Olaf


On Tue, Mar 25, 2014 at 4:57 AM, Florian Westreicher Bakk.techn. <
[email protected]> wrote:

> The article has no clean line to follow and is confusing to read. You also
> have a few grammar mistakes and typos here and there.
>
> On March 25, 2014 3:21:19 AM CET, Olafur Arason <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >https://plus.google.com/u/0/113901280667512186151/posts/fCmaosPgmwN
> >
> >I would love to get you opinion, I've talked this subject over
> >with a lot of people and always at first they don't understand
> >it then they come to really love it.
> >
> >Regards,
> >Olaf
>
> --
> Sent from Kaiten Mail. Please excuse my brevity.
>

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