I know that "... and so on" is ugly but It is difficult to provide an 
exhaustive list too. But you are right, and I am ok if we remove it.
I would probably add to the items: Content Management, Accounting, Project 
Management.
Then there are a few minor improvements that I would like to see:
* switch the acronym/full name positions, i.e. instead of "ERP (Enterprise 
Resource Planning)" I would prefer "Enterprise Resource Planning (ERP)"
* "Manufacturing Resources Planning" should be "Manufacturing Resource Planning"

And about the box in the right side we could mentions that there are 
integrations with external payment processors etc...

Jacopo

On Sep 9, 2014, at 5:48 AM, Ron Wheeler <[email protected]> wrote:

> One last thing!
> Apache OFBiz^(TM) is an open source product for the automation of enterprise 
> processes that includes framework components and business applications for 
> ERP (Enterprise Resource Planning), CRM (Customer Relationship Management), 
> E-Business / E-Commerce, SCM (Supply Chain Management), MRP (Manufacturing 
> Resources Planning), MMS/EAM (Maintenance Management System/Enterprise Asset 
> Management), POS (Point Of Sale) and so on.
> 
> Can we remove the "...and so on" or write what it covers?
> 
> Ron
> 
> -- 
> Ron Wheeler
> President
> Artifact Software Inc
> email: [email protected]
> skype: ronaldmwheeler
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> 

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