Hello Sharan,

Thanks so much for sharing the template for new website. It looks very
good. Thanks Taher and Fernando for your help on this.
I am sharing few points where we can discuss and conclude:

1) If we talk about slider then it has Grey Background and text is written
in White and it is hard to read those content. In recent conversation it is
discussed that it will be changed with Actual images so probably this point
will be taken care at that time.

2) Can we shift "Download OFBiz" block to second position? I think when a
*new* user comes to the page then first he has thoughts in mind like What
is OFBiz, What are the features supported by OFBiz, Whether it can be right
fit for my business or not. And if user thinks those details convincing one
then he can go ahead and download the software. So putting second block to
the first position seems more logical to me.

3) Now if we talk about second block: Can we improve the second line? A
common architecture ..... This line particularly addresses the interest
developer. I think we can phrase a line that says "End User" or all the
user. I know it can be tricky one but we can talk like what can be better
line that can be used there.

4) Inside Powerful Java Web Framework -> Can we change "sporting" word to
"featuring" or may be some other better word.

5) Does this "Mature" word looks good to be used with ERP, specially using
it with main heading looks good? I was exploring the usage of this word and
landed to this page - http://sentence.yourdictionary.com/mature. Any other
word can be used in place of Mature?

6) Please confirm that "Community" link will be navigating user to Mailing
List page? And "Users" link will be navigating user to this page -
https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/x/IQFk. Please confirm?

I hope my points are valid one and will be helpful to make ofbiz new
website more user friendly. Please feel free to ignore any points that you
think are not relevant.
Thanks!

--
Kind Regards
Ashish Vijaywargiya
HotWax Systems - est. 1997

On Mon, May 23, 2016 at 1:30 PM, Sharan-F <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi Everyone
>
> It's taken a bit longer than I anticipated but I've finally managed to put
> together some draft pages for our proposed new website. (Thanks very much
> to
> Taher and Fernando who helped get things moving.)
>
> Rather than start completely from scratch, our team selected what we think
> is a nice clean template with a modern look that also includes a lot of
> features such as :
>
> - Responsive
> - Twitter bootstrap integrated
> - Slider functions
> - CSS animation
> - Grid system
>
> We have setup a header format that follows the menu structure that was
> agreed by the community a few months ago. There is also a footer that
> incorporates our links and also the twitter feed.
>
> I've loaded some draft pages onto the wiki as follows
>
> Draft Home Page -
>
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/download/attachments/61317052/Main_Page_Example_Slider1.png?api=v2
>
> Draft FAQ Page -
>
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/download/attachments/61317052/FAQs_Example_Screen.png?api=v2
>
> Draft Downloads Page -
>
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/download/attachments/61317052/Downloads_Example_Screen.png?api=v2
>
> Draft Mailing List Page -
>
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/download/attachments/61317052/Mailing_List_Example_Screen.png?api=v2
>
> Before we go any further I'm keen to know what the community thinks so
> please take a look and let me have your feedback.
>
> Thanks
> Sharan
>
>
>
>
>
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>

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