Jayson,
Some comments;
1) Reduce the amount of side bars. At the moment the readability is impaired
by having two right hand bars reducing the meat of your book to only 2/3rds
of the width of the page.
2) Put up more than one chapter. If you want comments on your formatting
then we need to see the whole book.
3) You need more background explanation. The section "Developing Your First
Struts2 Application" doesn't explain what the files you've given actually
do. It ends up being more of a "cut, paste, run, sit back and wonder why you
still wouldn't know how to change it".
4) Improve your English. The phrase "Following are the files we need in
struts2demo project and the purpose of each of them is also given." sounds
like it's come from a badly translated manual.
If you want a good example of a readable book with excellent explanations
have a look at Ians' "Starting Struts 2" book, I've picked up a couple of
things from it and have found it easy to read (which reminds me I must go
and post a review on Amazon).
Al.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Jayson Joseph Chacko" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: "Struts Users Mailing List" <[email protected]>
Sent: Monday, January 21, 2008 7:19 AM
Subject: New Struts2 Book : Feedback Requested
Hi Guys,
I am working on a new Struts2 book titled - "Struts2 Guide for Web
Application Developers".
The target audience is Web application developers starting on Struts2
framework.
I have created some sample chapters and an overall book layout. You can
see
it at ,
http://www.struts2.org/free-struts2-book/
I require feedback on the book content/layout and any suggestions for new
topics to be included.
I plan to complete the book after Struts 2.1 is released.
TIA,
Jayson
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