Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-uta-tls-attacks-04: Yes

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A tiny thing in the Introduction: "suffice it to say" may sound cute, but
if it were really sufficient, the document could stop there.  I suggest
replacing "suffice it to say" with "a quick summary is".  But take this
or leave it as you please.

My other comment is more significant:

-- Section 2.13 --

   o  Implementations may not validate the server identity.  This
      validation typically amounts to matching the protocol-level server
      name with the certificate's Subject Alternative Name field.  Note:
      historically, although incorrect, this information is also often
      found in the Common Name part of the Distinguished Name instead.

I had to read the "note" a few times before I followed it.  It's not the
information that's incorrect, and the "also ... instead" bit is
confusing.  But the biggest problem is that it's unclear what the
incorrect thing IS: is it that the information is put in the CN and
shouldn't be?  Or is it that validators retrieve it from there instead of
from the SAN?  Maybe this (correct it as necessary)?:

NEW
   o  Implementations might not validate the server identity.  This
      validation typically amounts to matching the protocol-level server
      name with the certificate's Subject Alternative Name field.  Note:
      this same information is often in the Common Name part of the
      Distinguished Name also, and some validators incorrectly retrieve
      it from there instead of from the Subject Alternative Name.

(That also changes the "may" to "might", to avoid accidentally conveying
a sense of permission.)


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