Looks nice!  My main recommendation would be in regards to this:

``Want to try Linux but scared you'll screw up your computer?''

There are a couple of reasons why I would consider changing this.  It
juxtaposes ``Linux'' with ``screw up your computer.''  It gets people
who are unfamiliar with Linux to start equating Linux with fear and
doubt, when that is not really necessary.  Also, there is quite a
large number of BYU students who find the phrase ``to screw up''
offensive, because of its connotation in the Gentile world.

I would also include the word ``Free'' in there somewhere.

The Tux bitmap is horrific.  Use the penguin.eps file instead:

http://adele.gerwinski.de/~anja/gnuart/penguin/

There is another one that is black-and-white; look around for it.

Last, but not least... it's *GNU*/Linux, dangit!!  :-)

Keep up the good work,
Mike

On Wed, Sep 10, 2003 at 07:46:26PM -0600, Evan McNabb wrote:
> If you're interested in posting a flier to the installfest, here are the 
> URLs:
> 
> http://students.cs.byu.edu/~emcnabb/installfest.pdf
> http://students.cs.byu.edu/~emcnabb/installfest.sxw
> 
> We'll have extra copies in the booth so feel free to stop by and pick
> some up.
> 
> In the last day or two we've had a lot of people sign up for the booth
> and installfest. Thanks for the good response. I hope I didn't sound
> harsh in my last few messages; I was just a little concerned /
> stressed... :-) Things are looking good.
> 
> Here are the links one more time for signing up to help at the
> booths/installfest:
> 
> http://uug.byu.edu/booth.php
> http://uug.byu.edu/signup.php
> 
> Thanks again!
> 
> -Evan
> 
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