hmmm.. i should read the whole pdf before submitting changes i guess... "...try downloading knoppix (www.knoppix.org), you download..."
comma should be a period... then "you download..." should be "You download..." might want to work slightly on the wording in the "You download" section as well... the last line of the second flier also should be looked at... i'd type it out, but i'm lazy and i'm stuck for the moment on a computer that doesn't have ooffice, so i have to work just with the pdf... other than the little typographical things (which you might have already fixed), it looks great!!!! ÙÙÙÙïErin On Sat, 28 Aug 2004 11:13:58 -0600, Erin Sharmahd <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > hope this edit doesn't come too late as far as printing of flyers > > "You'll still be able to do most everything that you usually do in > Linux that you do in your current OS" > > this statement doesn't quite work. Reading it, i see what you're > trying to say, but it doesn't quite say it... > how about: > "you'll be able to use Linux to do everything you do with your current OS" > or... > "You'll still be able to do most everything that you usually do in > your current OS in Linux" > ~Erin > > > > > On Thu, 26 Aug 2004 23:57:28 -0400 (EDT), [EMAIL PROTECTED] > <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > On Thu, 26 Aug 2004 17:26:12 -0600, Andrew McNabb <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > > wrote: > > >> ... > > >> and plenty of flyers for handing out. > > > > > > About the flyers, they really will look a lot better with vector tux > > > than with raster tux. I've got both the color and black & white > > > versions here: > > > > > > > On the note of flyers, I've spent a small portion of my afternoon writting > > up what would be a two sided flyer (normal letter paper). One side, What > > is Linux?, other side, What/Who is the BYU-UUG. Nothing very detailed, > > just a brief intro to give people ideas. Designed with the less technical > > in mind, with the hope that they might consider using Linux. > > > > http://spr.mahonri5.net/files/whatlinux.pdf > > http://spr.mahonri5.net/files/whatlinux.sxw > > > > For the files. If you'd like to make suggestions, feel free. Email me off > > list with them, or attach a edited (with colors) .sxw file. > > > > Scott > > > > > > > > ____________________ > > BYU Unix Users Group > > http://uug.byu.edu/ > > ___________________________________________________________________ > > List Info: http://uug.byu.edu/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/uug-list > > > > > -- > -- userfriendly.org -- > -- -- userfriendly.org -- ____________________ BYU Unix Users Group http://uug.byu.edu/ ___________________________________________________________________ List Info: http://uug.byu.edu/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/uug-list
