jvanzyl     00/10/14 12:20:44

  Modified:    xdocs    install.xml todo.xml user-guide.xml
  Log:
  Edits.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.6       +5 -2      jakarta-velocity/xdocs/install.xml
  
  Index: install.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvs/jakarta-velocity/xdocs/install.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.5
  retrieving revision 1.6
  diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
  --- install.xml       2000/10/05 02:12:21     1.5
  +++ install.xml       2000/10/14 19:20:43     1.6
  @@ -15,7 +15,9 @@
   <s1 title="Installation">
   
   <p>
  -    Everything required to build Velocity comes with the distribution.
  +    Everything required to build Velocity comes with the distribution, which 
  +    be obtained via <link 
href="http://jakarta.apache.org/getinvolved/cvsindex.html">CVS</link> 
  +    or <link 
href="http://jakarta.apache.org/builds/jakarta-velocity/nightly/">downloaded</link>.
   </p>
   
   </s1>
  @@ -23,7 +25,8 @@
   <s1 title="Compiling">
   
   <p>
  -    On Unix/Linux, execute the following script in the velocity/build directory:
  +    On Unix/Linux, sh to the velocity/build directory and execute the following 
  +    script:
   </p>    
   
   <p>
  
  
  
  1.6       +21 -21    jakarta-velocity/xdocs/todo.xml
  
  Index: todo.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvs/jakarta-velocity/xdocs/todo.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.5
  retrieving revision 1.6
  diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
  --- todo.xml  2000/10/13 16:50:14     1.5
  +++ todo.xml  2000/10/14 19:20:43     1.6
  @@ -16,12 +16,11 @@
   
   <p>
   This is an informal document describing what needs to
  -be done in the Velocity code base, and the 
  -Velocity documentation. If you need more detailed help, please 
  -send mail to the mailing list 
  -(<link 
href="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">[EMAIL PROTECTED]</link>)
  -and ask your specific questions there. The list below is vaguely in order of
  -importance.
  +be done in the Velocity code base and the 
  +Velocity documentation. If you need more detailed help, or have specific 
  +questions, please send mail to the mailing list 
  +(<link 
href="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">[EMAIL PROTECTED]</link>). 
  +The Todo list that follows is roughly in order of importance.
   </p>
   
   </s1>
  @@ -31,7 +30,7 @@
       <strong>Runtime API</strong>
       <br/>
           The Velocity Runtime is the single access point for all
  -        of Velocity's functionality. A standard API for the
  +        Velocity's functionality. A standard API for the
           Runtime should be defined so that in the span between
           the 0.5 Milestone release and a 1.0 release, the Runtime
           API changes as little as possible.
  @@ -71,7 +70,7 @@
       <strong>Sample Applications</strong>
       <br/>
           Any type of sample application would be useful to
  -        help kickstart new developers get acquainted with
  +        help new developers get acquainted with
           Velocity. Any suggestions are welcome.
       <p/>
   
  @@ -89,7 +88,7 @@
       <strong>Developer Guide</strong>
       <br/>
           This would be a guide for developers who would use
  -        Velocity as a stand-alone servlet tool, or in conjuction
  +        Velocity as a standalone servlet tool, or in conjuction
           with a servlet controller framework like Turbine.
           <link href="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Jason van Zyl</link> is
           currently working on this guide, but any and all suggestions
  @@ -111,13 +110,14 @@
           It would be good to have a discussion about how objects
           in the context should be cached, how the caching
           should be specified, and who should control the
  -        caching: the designer by specifying something in the template, the developer
  -        by place expiry times on objects placed in the context,
  -        or a third party like a content manager. For example,
  +        caching: the designer, by specifying something in the template; 
  +     the developer,
  +        by placing expiry times on objects placed in the context;
  +        or a third party, such as a content manager. For example,
           say an array consisting of a top 10 list of books is
           placed in the context. This top 10 list might be valid
           for a 24 hour period: how should that be specified? Say
  -        a content manager decides that this list is now valid
  +        a content manager later decides this list will be valid
           for a week. Do they tell the designer, who in turn changes
           the template, or could we provide a mechanism that would
           allow a content manager to change the default expiry time
  @@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
       <strong>UML Overview</strong>
       <br/>
           It would great to include a set of comprehensive
  -        UML diagrams that describe Velocity in order to
  +        UML diagrams that describe Velocity. This would 
           allow new developers to get up to speed quickly.
       <p/>
   
  @@ -177,7 +177,7 @@
       
       <strong>Context Tools</strong>
       <br/>
  -        What kind of tools might be good to add to Velocity. There
  +        What kind of tools might be good to add to Velocity? There
           are several utilties that have been created in Turbine that
           might be good to move over to the Velocity code base.
       <p/>
  @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
       <strong>Syntax Dumper</strong>
       <br/>
           Right now there is a primitive syntax dumper in the Velocity
  -        code base, but it could be improved. This tool is very helpful
  +        code base, and it could be improved. This tool is very helpful
           in debugging, and it is also good for creating directives.
           It basically has a simple dump method that is used for all
           the AST node types. It would be good to tailor dump methods
  @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@
       
       <strong>Syntax Checker</strong>
       <br/>
  -        It would be good to have a standard syntax checker. Something
  +        It would be good to have a standard syntax checker, something
           that would find all syntax errors and report them to the
           designer in some intelligible format. This tool could be
           hooked into various designer tools like DreamWeaver.
  @@ -213,8 +213,8 @@
       <strong>Compiler</strong>
       <br/>
           It would be great to have a template compiler. There is a great
  -        utility call JavaClass that provides a very clean and simple way
  -        to create class files; there is also some byte code generating
  +        utility called JavaClass that provides a very clean and simple way
  +        to create class files, and there is also some byte code generating
           code present in the DynamicJava package that could be utilized.
       <p/>
   
  @@ -228,10 +228,10 @@
       <br/>
           This is something that has been discussed on the Turbine
           list. Allowing Context building classes to be written
  -        in JPython, Rhino or another scripting language. This would 
  +        in JPython, Rhino or other scripting languages would 
           dramatically improve development time and might allow technically 
           proficient web designers who are familiar JavaScript to create 
  -        an entire servlet solution with Velocity. And as most of these
  +        an entire servlet solution with Velocity. As most of these
           scripting solutions provide a compiler, performance would still
           remain at an acceptable level.
       <p/>
  
  
  
  1.4       +5 -5      jakarta-velocity/xdocs/user-guide.xml
  
  Index: user-guide.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvs/jakarta-velocity/xdocs/user-guide.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- user-guide.xml    2000/10/13 18:47:18     1.3
  +++ user-guide.xml    2000/10/14 19:20:44     1.4
  @@ -17,17 +17,17 @@
   <p>
       This guide is meant to provide an easy way for designers
       to get aquainted with Velocity. Velocity may be used as a
  -    stand-alone servlet framework, or may be used in conjuction
  -    with another servlet framework like 
  -    <link href="http://java.apache.org/turbine/">Turbine</link>,
  -    but in both cases a designer will be using the Velocity
  +    standalone servlet framework or in conjuction
  +    with another servlet framework such as  
  +    <link href="http://java.apache.org/turbine/">Turbine</link>.
  +    In all cases a page designer will use the Velocity
       Template Language (VTL) to incorporate dynamic content
       into a site design.
   </p>
   
   <p>
       The VTL is meant to provide the easiest, simplest, and
  -    cleanest way to render dynamic content in a page design.
  +    cleanest way to render dynamic content in a web page.
   </p>
   
   </s1>
  
  
  

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