Author: wglass
Date: Mon Jan 31 17:13:59 2005
New Revision: 149347

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?view=rev&rev=149347
Log:
better descriptor of YMTD screenshots.  
http://issues.apache.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=32411

Modified:
    jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.html
    jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-saying-hello.html
    jakarta/velocity/trunk/xdocs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.xml

Modified: jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.html?view=diff&r1=149346&r2=149347
==============================================================================
--- jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.html (original)
+++ jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.html Mon Jan 31 17:13:59 2005
@@ -176,6 +176,7 @@
 </p>
                                                 <p>
 <ul>
+<li>A little more description under screenshots to emphasize they show the 
source viewed in a browser, not the results.</li>
 <li>Rebuilt the helloworld.jsp example using Tomcat 3.3m2</li>
 <li>Added Struts HelloWorld example from: <a href="mailto:[EMAIL 
PROTECTED]">Martin Cooper</a></li>
 <li>Integrated feedback from <a href="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Geir

Modified: jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-saying-hello.html
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-saying-hello.html?view=diff&r1=149346&r2=149347
==============================================================================
--- jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-saying-hello.html (original)
+++ jakarta/velocity/trunk/docs/ymtd/ymtd-saying-hello.html Mon Jan 31 17:13:59 
2005
@@ -251,7 +251,9 @@
 <li><a href="./images/hello-velocity.gif" target="newWindow">Hello Velocity 
Screen shot</a></li>
 </ul>
                                                 <p>
-<font size="-1">[ These two screen shots demonstrate the idea that one
+<font size="-1">[ These are screen shots showing the above
+example when loaded directly into the browser.
+They demonstrate the idea that one
 cannot easily look at what the code is doing in a browser when using
 JSP. ]</font>
 </p>

Modified: jakarta/velocity/trunk/xdocs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/jakarta/velocity/trunk/xdocs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.xml?view=diff&r1=149346&r2=149347
==============================================================================
--- jakarta/velocity/trunk/xdocs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.xml (original)
+++ jakarta/velocity/trunk/xdocs/ymtd/ymtd-changes.xml Mon Jan 31 17:13:59 2005
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 <p>
 <ul>
-<li>A little more description under screenshots to emphasize they show the 
source viewed in a browser, not the results.
+<li>A little more description under screenshots to emphasize they show the 
source viewed in a browser, not the results.</li>
 <li>Rebuilt the helloworld.jsp example using Tomcat 3.3m2</li>
 <li>Added Struts HelloWorld example from: <a
 href="mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]">Martin Cooper</a></li>



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