Content:  I like it, feels "fresh." 

Production Values: I like it, video shooting and editing with rough
edges, somewhat out of control. Don't polish it up too much. You need
to hire Bre Pettis for technical advise and props development--just a
little "flash & buzz" on the robotics would be good, but keep it with
cardboard, crayons & aluminum foil. 

Distribution:  Seems just right to take it to the "social media"
realm, although I don't go there and would have never found it, except
for the message here. Make your own "rinky dink" webpage, too--just
one page, not a whole website.


John Leeke
www.HistoricHomeWorks.com

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