The sentence designating the documents defining what later
became known as the legacy virtio interface had the most
important piece of information placed in parenthesis.

Let's reword this sentence so we avoid using an ambiguous designation
based on a relative anchor (i.e. 'earlier drafts of this specification')
and just use the absolute anchor (version 1.0).

Signed-off-by: Halil Pasic <pa...@linux.vnet.ibm.com>
---
 introduction.tex |    4 ++--
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
index 979881e..78c340d 100644
--- a/introduction.tex
+++ b/introduction.tex
@@ -78,8 +78,8 @@ The key words ``MUST'', ``MUST NOT'', ``REQUIRED'', 
``SHALL'', ``SHALL NOT'', ``
 \subsection{Legacy Interface: Terminology}\label{intro:Legacy
 Interface: Terminology}
 
-Earlier drafts of this specification (i.e. revisions before 1.0,
-see e.g. \hyperref[intro:Virtio PCI Draft]{[Virtio PCI Draft]})
+Specification drafts preceding version 1.0 of this specification
+(e.g. see \hyperref[intro:Virtio PCI Draft]{[Virtio PCI Draft]})
 defined a similar, but different
 interface between the driver and the device.
 Since these are widely deployed, this specification
-- 
1.7.1


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