On 05/15/2018 10:58 AM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
On Thu, Apr 26, 2018 at 01:00:01PM +0200, Halil Pasic wrote:
@@ -1716,26 +1716,28 @@ The driver will typically initialize the virtual queue 
in the following way:
  \item Write 0x1 to \field{QueueReady}.
  \end{enumerate}
-\subsubsection{Notifying The Device}\label{sec:Virtio Transport Options / Virtio Over MMIO / MMIO-specific Initialization And Device Operation / Notifying The Device}
+\subsubsection{Available Buffer Notifications}\label{sec:Virtio Transport 
Options / Virtio Over MMIO / MMIO-specific Initialization And Device Operation 
/ Available Buffer Notifications}
-The driver notifies the device about new buffers being available in
-a queue by writing the index of the updated queue to \field{QueueNotify}.
+The driver sends an available buffer notification to the device a by

s/device a by/device by/

+writing the index of the queue to \field{QueueNotify} to be notified.
\subsubsection{Notifications From The Device}\label{sec:Virtio Transport Options / Virtio Over MMIO / MMIO-specific Initialization And Device Operation / Notifications From The Device} The memory mapped virtio device is using a single, dedicated
  interrupt signal, which is asserted when at least one of the
  bits described in the description of \field{InterruptStatus}
-is set. This is how the device notifies the
-driver about a new used buffer being available in the queue
-or about a change in the device configuration.
+is set. This is how the device sends an used buffer notification
+or a configuration change notifaciton to the device.

s/notifaciton/notification/

Please run a spell checker over the patches in case I missed other
typos.

I did but I missed this one (and maybe some more). Will try to be
more careful when preparing v2.


\drivernormative{\paragraph}{Notifications From The Device}{Virtio Transport Options / Virtio Over MMIO / MMIO-specific Initialization And Device Operation / Notifications From The Device}
  After receiving an interrupt, the driver MUST read
-\field{InterruptStatus} to check what caused the interrupt
-(see the register description). After the interrupt is handled,
-the driver MUST acknowledge it by writing a bit mask
-corresponding to the handled events to the InterruptACK register.
+
+\field{InterruptStatus} to check what caused the interrupt (see the
+register description).  The used buffer notification bit being set,

The comma is unnecessary here.  The "SHOULD ..." clause is not
independent and needs something directly before it.


Right.

I won't comment back to the rest of your comments separately. I recognize
them as legit and I will address them in v2.

Many thanks!

Regards,
Halil


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