On Tue, May 10, 2022 at 03:29:45PM +0200, Cornelia Huck wrote:
> On Tue, May 10 2022, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> > Paul Knight wrote:
> >
> > In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this
> > initial public review publication:
> > - broken link in Normative references:
> > -- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
> > Publication SA22-7204,
> > http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and
> > any
> > future revisions
> > (This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source
> > for
> > this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no
> > longer
> > available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation
> > at
> > 4.3.1.3 is still needed.)
> > This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification
> > Draft,
> > but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification.
> >
> > Reported-by: Paul Knight <[email protected]>
> > Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <[email protected]>
> > Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
> > ---
> > introduction.tex | 3 ++-
> > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
> > index 4dc7085..0a78e78 100644
> > --- a/introduction.tex
> > +++ b/introduction.tex
> > @@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative
> > References}
> > IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122,
> > July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\
> > \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} &
> > z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832,
> > \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and
> > any future revisions\\
> > - \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]}
> > & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication
> > SA22-7204,
> > \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS},
> > and any future revisions\\
> > + \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390
> > +Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM
> > Publication SA22-7204-01,
> > \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401},
> > and any future revisions\\
>
> Ok, in the context diff I see that we don't use any suffix for the PoP,
> so I guess that we shouldn't use a suffix here, either.
Sorry I don't really understand what you are saying here.
Is this an ack?
> > \phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} &
> > Conventional PCI Specifications,
> > \newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},
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