Reads like you've already visited the Dime Box. One need not travel the
galaxy to find truth stranger than fiction. Wall Street has it all. Peeking
under the skirts of a girl like Merrill Lynch can give you the drama of a
lifetime.
Richard
Howdy Kyle,
Writing fiction requires "fictional imagination". By
reading your comments,
you are suggesting injecting truth to make it
believable...
That's not the way to tell a story at the Dime Box
saloon best liar's
contest.
Hmmm...maybe I should have my intrepid heroes visit
the Dime Box Saloon at some point in their travels.
--Kyle