This document is unprofessional. The photographs should have captions, like the ones in the Scientific American or a trade magazine. A caption should tell the reader what this is, and what the significance of it is. Like so:
An XXXX reactor (nn cm x nn cm x nn cm). On the left is a canister of blah, on the right is blah, blah. This reactor has been run n times, producing maximum power of n kW, and nn MJ of energy. Photo credit: so-and-so (or Defkalion Corp.) - Jed
