I think you should develop more you story. It has a decent premise, I think.
2012/5/30 Moab Moab <moab2...@googlemail.com> > It is well known amongst the races of the universe that once a > civilization has developed "cold fusion" they lose their protection > and become fair game for intergalactic warfare. > > The extraterrestrial friends of the Maya explained to them that, > unless it can be stopped, this is predicted to happen in December > 2012. Therefore the friendlies have tried to steer humanity away from > discovering the secret of "cold fusion", instead giving them > gunpowder, steam, fission and helping them to get "hot fusion" up and > running. This is proven by the newly discovered Maya calendars that go > way beyond 2012. > > However many hostile breeds have infiltrated on earth to force the > discovery of "cold fusion", so that they can then freely usurp the > earth unbound by intergalactic code of conduct. Apart from earlier > alchemical attempts the biggest coup happened in 1989 and earth almost > lost her protection status. Only a tightly orchestrated effort could > pull the neck out of the noose, friendlies were put on key positions > to effectively halt advancement in any possible way. > > Based on this theory it is clear that agents of the hostile aliens are > amongst the proponents of cold fusion. Unfortunately they seem to be > winning the game and an ever increasing number of innocent earthlings > take their side in the hope of a bright future. > > For the love of planet earth and all its inhabitants, denounce cold > fusion. It is not humanity's road to freedom, but our road to > destruction and annihilation. > > It is obvious that anyone who ridicules or pokes fun at this theory is > a agent of the hostiles, do not listen to them ! > > Moab > > -- Daniel Rocha - RJ danieldi...@gmail.com