Promised Soren this a couple months ago... ::blushes::
<<Google Wave is a... platform>>
<<and to "federate" waves, that is, to share waves with each other and with
Google Wave>>
<<In this model, Google Wave is one of many wave providers.>>
'Google Wave' is used inconsistently in the docs. In the above examples it
means both:
The wave provider which is Google.
The platform.
<<"In particular, attachments and groups are important elements of wave
federation that are not covered herein. They will be treated in follow-up
material on this site before long..>>
You've got attachments now. I'd very much like to know what the plan is for
groups, insofar as there is one, or what the status is for coming up with a
plan.
<<In the remainder we ignore addressees that are services, including robots
and gateways - they are treated largely the same as users with respect to
federation.>>
Probably want a semicolon here instead of an em dash (or normal dash).
<<The wave service uses a federation gateway and a federation proxy
component to communicate with with other wave providers.>>
one 'with' will do.
<< • It processes wavelet operations submission requests.
•
The fedeeration...>>
estra bullet
<<retrying with an exponential backoff>>
Maybe "with exponential backoff" or "by means of an exponential backoff
algorithm"
<<t. The host federation gateway responds by sending the new AddParticipant
operation forwarding all ensuing new operations to the federation proxy, but
the latter must itself turn around and request the prior operations>>
Is there a way to just get the most recent version?
<<has a participant which is a user @acmewave.com>>
"at acmewave.com"
<<it only provides cryptographic security between servers the connect>>
"that connect"
<<This makes it impossible for evil.com to alter or spoof the contents of
the messages>>
"content"
<<Danny Berlin:>>
Elsewhere, "Daniel"
<<offer a reasonable level of security between end clients.>>
end clients?
<<it is recommended that it offers its end users secure encrypted
connections to its wave service frontend.>>
"offer" I assume frontend is the same as "client" elsewhere, so that might
also be changed.
<<In combination, secure connections between wave services and secure
connections between users and their wave services offer a reasonable level
of security between end clients.>>
"between end clients" is awkward. Maybe "offer a reasonable level of
security overall."
Hope all's well in Sydney & MTV.
Jd
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