Jan, If and when OE or my ISP permits mail to be sent...!
(and IE 5.5 on 98SE is a bit slow today) your site seemed to come up reasonably quickly, though IE didn't find it at first go. Once told to go fetch it came up fine and the main picture was refreshingly fast in appearing (56 modem). Generally your colours and layout form a good background to the pictures and the white on black wording surprised me with its success. The links worked quickly (though they are all roads to nowhere as yet). Buts: 1/The black wording across your logo is not readable enough; you need either a light shadow or a different colour. If that is light shadow that you have already tried it isn't enough, or it otherwise isn't doing the job. Pity. It's a good line. 2/The widow in the last paragraph is a 'jarring note', emphasised because it is above the bottom picture. I suggest 'lighted' be changed to 'lit' thus pulling 'night!' on to the line above. Or make the paragraph more active; See (or Ask about) the miniature inflatables. Print your comapny logos on any of the puppets. They may be lit (or lighted) to entertain day or night! 3/The pin-stripe background has one disadvantage which would be enough to make me leave the site (but I can't stand most effects on televisin either). When scrolling it gives a flicker effect which is most disturbing; I know it would be fine if no scrolling were involved, but we surfers are not considerate about you designers ;-). Hope these are helpful. Joseph http://www.jdvisions.com/testpage/index.htm > Forgot, > > Any and all comments, etc. are welcome > > http://www.jdvisions.com/testpage/index.htm > > Jan > -- > http://www.jdvisions.com > Web Development and Design ____ � The WDVL Discussion List from WDVL.COM � ____ To Join wdvltalk, Send An Email To: mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Send Your Posts To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To change subscription settings to the wdvltalk digest version: http://wdvl.internet.com/WDVL/Forum/#sub ________________ http://www.wdvl.com _______________________ You are currently subscribed to wdvltalk as: [email protected] To unsubscribe send a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
