I think the site looks lovely. However, the copy (at least on the nutrition tips pages) could use some editing ... it includes run-on sentences, subject-verb disagreement, and other grammar crimes. You may not be in a position to suggest to the client that they have a good editor go over these, but it sure would help; to me, nothing says "unprofessional" as loudly as bad writing :) Again, this is no reflection on the site itself, which is great.
Amanda Birmingham Web Application Developer
At 10:59 PM 8/4/2003 +0100, you wrote:
guys I was wondering if I could please get a site check on www.emmabuckley.com - almost finished, everything done except for the celeb page. Gonna show the client tomorrow so I'd appreciate your feedback on all the usual :o)
tia jac.
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