I'm in a horrid job crunch, a client meeting that I had only 24 hours notice on. Arrrggg...
But you folks have helped me tons, so here's my 60 second review of two pages of this site: 1. I delicately humbly suggest that you ditch the animation on home page, where the models change to show the different styles of maternity clothing. I graciously suggest possibly replacing the animation with thumbnails: business, casual, [add: "formal"?] occasion, evening, underwear. Animation is distracting on Home Page. 2. When I clicked on "business" all I saw was two models in different outfits, no caption, no clickable images, nothing identifying the outfits, no fast way to tell how to see or learn more about the business atttire. Remember, I'm in a horrible hell of a hurry, like most web users. 3. I love the "show me" captions. Great. Simple and direct. 4. I love the overall design, very professional, serious, high credibility from the get go. Good job fellers. Wow. 5. I love the overall simplicity, clean layout, nice graphics, the thumbnail photos you use. 6. "Vouchers"--huh? School vouchers? What is this? 7. "Bookings"--for what? A salesperson? Fashion show? Models? 8. "Stylish and Fashionable Maternity Wear & Gifts" okay, but it's redundant. Why not "Fashionable and Affordable..."? 9. "Gifts"--okay, but why not beef it up a bit? Gifts To Ease the Pregnancy? This is dorky of course, but you know what I'm driving at--add a benefit to the generic word "Gifts". Gifts could be candy, jewelry, etc....I know you show some on the home page, but the term "Gifts" could be worded more powerfully. Sorry, I must hurry off now. Will return. Will examine this site, more pages of it, more closely later. Steven Streight STREIGHT SITE SYSTEMS Web Usability Analysis, Credibility Assessment & Content Writing [EMAIL PROTECTED] www.vaspersthegrate.blogspot.com ____ � The WDVL Discussion List from WDVL.COM � ____ To Join wdvltalk, Send An Email To: mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Send Your Posts To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To set a personal password send an email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with the words: "set WDVLTALK pw=yourpassword" in the body of the email. To change subscription settings to the wdvltalk digest version: http://wdvl.internet.com/WDVL/Forum/#sub ________________ http://www.wdvl.com _______________________ You are currently subscribed to wdvltalk as: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To unsubscribe send a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] To unsubscribe via postal mail, please contact us at: Jupitermedia Corp. Attn: Discussion List Management 475 Park Avenue South New York, NY 10016 Please include the email address which you have been contacted with.
