Thanks Joseph and Deb.
Deb - it's not "health type" site as in Good
health/vitamins etc. - it's Industrial/Commercial
Health and Safety. (not that your comments are valid there too).
I've passed the comments back to the programmer
and told him the floggings continue until adjustments are made. LOL
Peter
At 09:47 01/10/2006, you wrote:
At 07:38 PM 9/30/2006, you wrote:
+++Expecting to see 'health and safety' in some
form, I saw instead 'Welcome to the Ranworth
Document Store '. Do you think the head should
be a little more to the point? 'Health and
Safety Documents and advice' for example?
I agree. I learned long ago to *never* use the
"Welcome to" line unless the client absolutely
insists on it. It's bad for SEO. It's more
important to get the topic of the site
across. On top of that "Welcome to" is
absolutely wayyyyyy over-used and boooooo-ring!
I think it looks very nice except for the topper
- it's hard to read. Not clear enough text or
graphic text (whichever you're using). It's
kind of garble-dy looking. The content font is
a little bit smaller than I'd like to see as
well. I would make the text a bit
bigger. Being that this is a health type site -
I also learned long ago from working for a
mental health professional web site, that
medical type sites should be really clean
looking for best results. So, making the text
larger and spacing it out some I think would
accomplish that nicely. Just to crowded looking is my opinion.
Some kind of logo that helps get the site topic
across would be nice, but not necessarily
required. But then, I'm big into logos so don't mind me!
:: Deb | PBC Web Design
:: http://www.pbcwebdesign.com
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