On Sunday, January 20, 2013 6:52:02 PM UTC-5, Massimo Di Pierro wrote: > > I am looking for help proofreading the final version of the book. It is > almost done up to a final touch. > > Would have loved to help, but didn't see this until late last night (due to laptop software migrations...)
Just a couple minor suggestions in the part I had time to read, mostly just a matter of personal taste and how the sentences "scanned" for me, as a native english speaker. from: If you benefit from it, we hope you will feel a little more like contributing back to society in whatever form you choose. to: If you benefit from it, we hope you will feel encouraged to ''pay it forward'' by contributing back to society in whatever form you choose. from: +web2py leaves little choice to application developers in matters related to security. to: +web2py leaves little exposure for applications in matters related to security. from: +Experimentally we support more databases. to: +We support additional databases (experimentally), and additional ones are constantly being developed. from: +Once one or more database tables are defined, web2py also generates a fully functional web-based database to: +Once one or more database tables are defined, web2py automatically generates a fully functional web-based database from: +web2py provides a ticketing system. If an error occurs, a ticket is issued to the user, to: +web2py provides a ticketing system for error events. If an error occurs, a ticket is issued to the user, from: +Another feature of web2py is that we, its developers, commit to maintain backward compatibility in future versions. to: +Another important feature of web2py is that we, its developers, commit to maintain backward compatibility in future versions. Mostly quite minor, but there it is. Keep up the excellent work, and I'm ready to buy the next copy as soon as it's available! Rufus --
