Hi Jim, Thanks for reviewing, my comments inline.
Jim Grisanzio wrote: > michelle olson wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> I've drafted a feature spot for 2008.11 here: >> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft17/ >> >> The other changes continue to be work in progress. I added some new >> graphics, links, and updated landing pages to try to address concerns >> from the prior review. Let me know what you think. >> >> Thanks in advance for your help to improve this content. >> >> > > It looks great. :) > > On the buttons: you may want to set them closer together. Done, let me know if they are still too big. http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft17/ > I have a small screen and the buttons wrap, so there are two on top > and one on the bottom and that results in an awkward space on the > right side. The buttons also wrap on my bigger laptop, which has a 12 > inch screen. > > UG button: it points to http://opensolaris.org/os/user_groups/. Is it > possible to change that URL to remove the underscore? /usergroups/ > seems cleaner to me. Fixed, thanks. > I am so used to creating projects with long URLs that even one > underscore sticks out to me. Also, I updated the text on that page > again. Hope it`s ok. > > Headline: I like notion of multiple projects joining to deliver the > final product. > > Contribute a Package page: boxes don`t line up. Not sure if it is > intentional. I'll work on those. Regards, Michelle > > Jim > _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
