> Shawn Walker wrote: > > Michelle Olson wrote: > >> Thank you Shawn, much appreciated. I've updated > the spot with your > >> suggestion, let me know what you think. > >> > http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home > _page_draft33/ > > > > I'd make the image smaller (1/3 to 1/2 smaller?), > but otherwise, it > > looks fine. > > done. thank you! >
I think that looks really good now. I would perhaps remove the word "specifically" as it seems a bit superfluous and is a strange way to start a paragraph. Cheers Andrew. -- This message posted from opensolaris.org _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
