Looks good to me from my quick skip through; I did notice another missing indent on line 60 of install-sfw (no need review it)
paul Amanda Waite wrote: > Thanks, I've addressed all of your comments TMPDIR has become > TMP_PROTO_DIR to avoid classes with the build environment and I've used > it throughout ('cept for DESTDIR in the make install target). > > Update webrev at: http://cr.opensolaris.org/~tekgrrl/FastCGI/ > > Thanks > > Amanda > > > > Paul Cunningham wrote: >> Amanda, >> >> Mainly looks good, but see below .. >> >> Paul >> >> Amanda Waite wrote: >>> >>> Changes at http://cr.opensolaris.org/~tekgrrl/FastCGI/ see inline for >>> comments. >>> >>> >>> Paul Cunningham wrote: >> >> .. cut ... >> >>>> 2. usr/src/lib/fastcgi/Makefile.sfw >> >> .. cut .. >> >>>> Lines ... >>>> 88 $(CCSMAKE) install >>>> 94 $(CCSMAKE) install >>>> why are these not installing into the ws proto area? >>> >>> Because of libtool. Believe me this is the only way to get libtool to >>> behave correctly >> >> Okay I believe you :-) >> I guess it must mangle something during the 'make install' stage >> >>>> Why not use the same name for TMPDIR and DESTDIR >>>> (its confusing) throughout ... (and into install-sfw*) >>> >>> Different things mus confuse different people, I found it confusing >>> when I made them the same. You're the voice of reason though so I've >>> changed it. >> >> That's better :-) But maybe TMPDIR would have been a better throughout >> (except the 'DESTDIR=' passed to 'make install'). Hope I'm not >> confusing you. >> >>>> >>>> 4. pkg copyright files (SUNW*/copyright) >>>> You probably need to add the source owner copyright lines >>>> at the top at the top of this, ie. those extracted from >>>> the src code files in the unpacked tarballs. >>> >>> I've done this but if I'm going to ask others to do the same I'd >>> really like to know where this instruction came from, is it >>> documented somewhere? It does kind of make sense, but then I'm not a >>> lawyer. >> >> Does SUNWfcgi-doc/copyright also need them? or some different ones >> >> >> ..cut .. >> >> Also ... >> 1. usr/src/lib/fastcgi/install-sfw >> You may want to indent line ... >> 107 _install N include/${file} ${INCDIR}/${file} 0444 >> for the do-done. >> > -- ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Paul Cunningham Software Engineer Tadpole Business Unit