Made corrections based on Jyri's feedback. Latest webrev is available at http://cr.opensolaris.org/~seema/6631480/
Thanks, Seema. Seema Alevoor wrote: >> usr/src/cmd/apache2/Solaris/apache2.1m.sunman >> >> "The Apache 2 is integrated with Solaris." >> >> That seems redundant.. if I'm reading the manpage is because it's >> installed ;-) So do we need to point it out? > > No need. > This was taken from the existing "apache" man page ! > >> "Depending on your machine architecture, [isainfo] should be expanded >> to either sparcv9 or amd64." >> >> Wording it that way forces you to change the manpage every time >> there is a different architecture. Better to just say it represents >> the output of 'isainfo -n'. >> > > Fine. Will change it to use "isainfo -n" on a 64-bit platform. > >> In the section listing directories, I suggesting adding >> /etc/apache2/[version]/original/ with explanation that its contents >> are delivered as-is from the apache distribution and these files are >> not meant to be read by the server, they are there as examples for the >> user. > > Fine. > >> SEE ALSO section has a link to "http://htto://www.apache.org";, correct >> that. > > Will fix this. >
