> My roommate is an editor at the USAToday - the McPaper - and said > that the first page of this woman's story is absolutely some of the > worst language and awkward wording she's ever seen. I absolutely > agree with her. Waste of 600 words.
Step forward Ylan Q. Mui.... from Saturday's Post > Giant Food continued to lose market share in the Washington area over the > past year as top > competitors Safeway and Shoppers Food Warehouse strengthened their positions <<snip>> > Shoppers Food Warehouse was the third-largest player with 42 stores and $1.35 > billion in sales. > It captured 14.56 percent of the market, down slightly from 14.89 percent the > previous year. Regards, Tony
