Author: esr
Date: Mon Mar 3 01:26:06 2008
New Revision: 24249
URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=24249&view=rev
Log:
Revert the bullet points to the form Sirp and I agreed on, including
the "ESR advertisement".
Modified:
website/start/1.4/template.html
Modified: website/start/1.4/template.html
URL:
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/website/start/1.4/template.html?rev=24249&r1=24248&r2=24249&view=diff
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--- website/start/1.4/template.html (original)
+++ website/start/1.4/template.html Mon Mar 3 01:26:06 2008
@@ -72,15 +72,22 @@
<h3 id='players'>For Players</h3>
<dl>
-<dt>Seven new campaigns now ship with the game</dt>
-<dd><p>We have more than doubled the number of campaigns we ship. In addition
to
-one brand new campaign, <em>The Hammer of Thursagan</em> by Eric S. Raymond, we
-now also ship polished, upgraded and improved versions of the following
-well-known user-written campaigns: <em>Descent into Darkness, Liberty, Northern
-Rebirth, Sceptre of Fire, An Orcish Incursion, and Son of the Black-Eye.</em>
-</p></dd>
-
-<dt>Parts of the user interface of the game have been redesigned</dt>
+<dt>Six well-known user-contributed campaigns now ship with the game</dt>
+<dd><p>We have more than doubled the number of campaigns we ship.
+Polished, upgraded and improved versions of the following well-known
+user-written campaigns now ship with the game: <em>Descent into Darkness,
+Liberty, Northern Rebirth, Sceptre of Fire, An Orcish Incursion, and
+Son of the Black-Eye.</em></p></dd>
+
+<dt>One brand new, all original campaign by an open-source luminary</dt>
+<dd><p>Eric S. Raymond, the open-source übergeek who wrote <a
+href='http://catb.org/~esr/writings/cathedral-bazaar/'>The Cathedral
+and the Bazaar</a>, has a not-so-well-kept secret; he loves strategy
+games. ESR joined our development team nine months ago, and in between
+contributing code and bugfixes he found time to write an all-new
+campaign for 1.4: <em>The Hammer of Thursagan</em>.</p></dd>
+
+<dt>The user interface of the game has been redesigned</dt>
<dd><p>The 1.4 Wesnoth user interface has a cleaner look and feel,
with lightweight semi-transparent transient windows replacing many of
the old-fashioned opaque modal dialogues with buttons. Subtle new
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