Author: cycholka
Date: Fri Jun 27 11:13:32 2008
New Revision: 27522
URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=27522&view=rev
Log:
Edits by Deciero. Spelling, punctuation, wording etc.
Modified:
trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Elder_Mage.cfg
trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighter.cfg
trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighteress.cfg
Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Elder_Mage.cfg
URL:
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Elder_Mage.cfg?rev=27522&r1=27521&r2=27522&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Elder_Mage.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Elder_Mage.cfg Fri Jun 27 11:13:32 2008
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
cost=65
usage=mixed fighter
die_sound={SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_OLD_DIE}
- description= _ "Once great, Elder Magi have seen their power a little
diminished from wearying years of battle. Nevertheless they remain feared on
the battlefield on account of their powerful lightning
bolts."+{SPECIAL_NOTES}+{SPECIAL_NOTES_MAGICAL}
+ description= _ "Once great, Elder Magi have seen their power diminished
from wearying years of battle. Nevertheless, they remain feared on the
battlefield for their powerful lightning
bolts."+{SPECIAL_NOTES}+{SPECIAL_NOTES_MAGICAL}
[attack]
name=staff
description= _"staff"
Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighter.cfg
URL:
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighter.cfg?rev=27522&r1=27521&r2=27522&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighter.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighter.cfg Fri Jun 27 11:13:32 2008
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
alignment=lawful
cost=18
usage=mixed fighter
- description= _ "Young and brash, Fighters fight with a sword, and are
vulnerable to attack from enemies. However they have the potential to become
great warriors one day."
+ description= _ "Young and brash, Fighters are skilled with swords and are
vulnerable to attack from enemies. However, they have the potential to become
great warriors one day."
die_sound={SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_DIE}
{DEFENSE_ANIM "units/konrad-fighter-defend.png" "units/konrad-fighter.png"
{SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_HIT} }
[attack]
Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighteress.cfg
URL:
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighteress.cfg?rev=27522&r1=27521&r2=27522&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighteress.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/tutorial/units/Fighteress.cfg Fri Jun 27 11:13:32 2008
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
alignment=lawful
cost=18
usage=mixed fighter
- description= _ "Young and brash, Fighters fight with a sword, and are
vulnerable to attack from enemies. However they have the potential to become
great warriors one day."
+ description= _ "Young and brash, Fighters are skilled with swords and are
vulnerable to attack from enemies. However, they have the potential to become
great warriors one day."
die_sound={SOUND_LIST:HUMAN_FEMALE_DIE}
[attack]
name=sabre
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