Author: zookeeper
Date: Tue Sep  2 21:36:29 2008
New Revision: 29214

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=29214&view=rev
Log:
Second batch of SotBE language tweaks by thespaceinvader.

Modified:
    trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/10_Saving_Inarix.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/11_Clash_Of_Armies.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/14_Back_Home.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/16_Coward.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/17_Human_Horde.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/18_Northern_Alliance.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/19_Epilogue.cfg

Modified: 
trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/10_Saving_Inarix.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/10_Saving_Inarix.cfg?rev=29214&r1=29213&r2=29214&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/10_Saving_Inarix.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/10_Saving_Inarix.cfg 
Tue Sep  2 21:36:29 2008
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
         [/message]
         [message]
             speaker="Plonk"
-            message= _ "We can sabotage the southern bridge to slow them down. 
When the bulk of the saurians have crossed, someone needs to go and light the 
barrel of thunderfire we have set up beside the bridge to destroy it. Any 
warriors trapped on the bridge or on the other side of the river will perish!"
+            message= _ "We can sabotage the southern bridge to slow them down. 
When the bulk of the saurians have crossed, someone needs to go and light the 
barrel of oil we have set up beside the bridge to destroy it. Any warriors 
trapped on the bridge or on the other side of the river will perish!"
         [/message]
 
         {HIGHLIGHT_IMAGE 21 13 items/barrel-floating.png ()}
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Inarix"
-            message= _ "Here we are, my friends. Earl Lanbec'h and his kind is 
on our tails, we must hurry up."
+            message= _ "Hurry-hurry, friends. Lanbec'h and his kind are right 
on our tails, we must reach Prestim quickly."
         [/message]
     [/event]
 
@@ -745,5 +745,6 @@
         {VARIABLE darstang_dead yes}
     [/event]
 
+
     [EMAIL PROTECTED]/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/utils/deaths.cfg}
 [/scenario]

Modified: 
trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/11_Clash_Of_Armies.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/11_Clash_Of_Armies.cfg?rev=29214&r1=29213&r2=29214&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/11_Clash_Of_Armies.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/11_Clash_Of_Armies.cfg 
Tue Sep  2 21:36:29 2008
@@ -241,22 +241,22 @@
 
         [message]
             role=cannonfodder
-            message= _ "In four days minimum. I fear it will be too late."
-        [/message]
-
-        [message]
-            speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "I don't think so, there is still a way..."
-        [/message]
-
-        [message]
-            role=cannonfodder
-            message= _ "Which one?"
-        [/message]
-
-        [message]
-            speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Most of their forces will cross the river by the ford 
where the bridge previously stood. If we can hold that ford, we might still 
have a chance."
+            message= _ "In four days. I fear it will be too late."
+        [/message]
+
+        [message]
+            speaker="Kapou'e"
+            message= _ "Fool! We can hold that long."
+        [/message]
+
+        [message]
+            role=cannonfodder
+            message= _ "How?"
+        [/message]
+
+        [message]
+            speaker="Kapou'e"
+            message= _ "Most of their forces will cross the river by the ford 
where the bridge previously stood. If we can hold that ford, we can hold the 
fortress."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Then, they will assault Prestim at five versus one. 
We'll just have to do the best we can."
+            message= _ "Then, they will assault Prestim at five troops to our 
one. We'll just have to do the best we can."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Ahh shoot! They have mermen on their side."
+            message= _ "Curses! They have fishmen on their side."
         [/message]
     [/event]
 

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/14_Back_Home.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/14_Back_Home.cfg?rev=29214&r1=29213&r2=29214&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/14_Back_Home.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/14_Back_Home.cfg Tue 
Sep  2 21:36:29 2008
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
 
     [story]
         [part]
-            story= _ "Having broken the dwarvish blockade, the horde continued 
on the mountain pass. Kapou'e began to recognize the lands about them and sure 
enough, they soon found themselves back in Kapoue's home country."
+            story= _ "Having broken the dwarvish blockade, the horde continued 
on through the mountain pass. Kapou'e began to recognize the lands about them 
and sure enough, they soon found themselves back in the tribe's homeland."
             background=sotbe.png
         [/part]
 
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Well, look at this boys, we are home. I told you we 
would return one day."
+            message= _ "Well, boys, we're home. I told you we would return one 
day."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Hearken, men. Our main objective is to rescue the 
shamans. It won't work to take the human-worms head-on while they sneak the 
shamans out the back door."
+            message= _ "Listen up, orcs. Our main objective is to rescue the 
shamans. It won't work to take the human runts head-on while they sneak the 
shamans out the back door."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Blood and stone, Grüü! You were supposed to be in 
position by first watch. It is now dawn!"
+            message= _ "Blood and stone, Grüü! You were supposed to be in 
position by first watch. It's dawn!"
             image=portraits/kapoue-angry.png
         [/message]
 
@@ -621,7 +621,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=second_unit
-            message= _ "Refer to Black-Eye Karun with respect, tree-shagger. 
Now, where are the shamans?"
+            message= _ "Refer to Black-Eye Karun with respect, wose-born. Now, 
where are the shamans?"
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "WHAT! The human-worms and tree-shaggers have gone too 
far! BLOOD AND STEEL! I want every human and elf in this area slaughtered! Show 
no mercy or quarter!"
+            message= _ "WHAT! The human-worms and tree-shaggers have gone too 
far! BLOOD AND STEEL! I want every human and elf in this area slaughtered! Show 
no mercy, give no quarter!"
             image=portraits/kapoue-angry.png
         [/message]
 

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/16_Coward.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/16_Coward.cfg?rev=29214&r1=29213&r2=29214&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/16_Coward.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/16_Coward.cfg Tue Sep  
2 21:36:29 2008
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Well let's see, first he betrays the trust of his 
sworn sovereign and becomes no less then a bootlicking spy for the humans. Then 
goes on to engineer the death of half of the Great Council and in doing so 
makes himself directly responsible for the deaths of hundreds of our brethren. 
And best of all, he is directly responsible for a bloody civil war right at the 
time when his people are on the edge of total extermination!"
+            message= _ "Well let's see, first he betrays the trust of his 
sworn sovereign and becomes no less then a bootlicking spy for the humans. Then 
goes on to engineer the death of half of the Great Council and in doing so 
makes himself directly responsible for the deaths of hundreds of orcs. And best 
of all, he is directly responsible for a bloody civil war right at the time 
when his people are on the edge of total extermination!"
         [/message]
 
         [message]

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/17_Human_Horde.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/17_Human_Horde.cfg?rev=29214&r1=29213&r2=29214&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/17_Human_Horde.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/17_Human_Horde.cfg Tue 
Sep  2 21:36:29 2008
@@ -715,12 +715,12 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Earl Lanbec'h"
-            message= _ " *groan* You guys always show up at the worst possible 
time."
+            message= _ " Howgarth? You and your interfering alliance always 
show up at the worst possible time."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Just who do you think you are, human-worm?"
+            message= _ "Just who do you think you are, slug?"
             image=portraits/kapoue-angry.png
         [/message]
 
@@ -751,7 +751,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Ha ha, very funny, human-worm. You think we are stupid 
enough to fall for that? We haven't forgotten what you people did to my father."
+            message= _ "Ha ha, very funny, old fool. You think we are stupid 
enough to fall for that? I've not forgotten what you people did to my father."
             image=portraits/kapoue-angry.png
         [/message]
 

Modified: 
trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/18_Northern_Alliance.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/18_Northern_Alliance.cfg?rev=29214&r1=29213&r2=29214&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- 
trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/18_Northern_Alliance.cfg 
(original)
+++ 
trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/18_Northern_Alliance.cfg 
Tue Sep  2 21:36:29 2008
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker="Kapou'e"
-            message= _ "Collaborating with the humans, pfff. Look who is 
talking. What are you doing here, Shan Taum?"
+            message= _ "Collaborating with the humans, pfff. You're one to 
talk. What are you doing here, Shan Taum?"
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -550,7 +550,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Shan Taum
-            message= _ "Blast! The human has escaped. Men, kill this 
turd-licker Kapou'e and report back to me. I must get to my camp and assault 
the city."
+            message= _ "Blast! The human has escaped. Orcs, bring me Kapou'e's 
head. I must get to my camp and assault the city."
         [/message]
 
         [store_unit]

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/19_Epilogue.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/19_Epilogue.cfg?rev=29214&r1=29213&r2=29214&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/19_Epilogue.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Son_Of_The_Black_Eye/scenarios/19_Epilogue.cfg Tue Sep 
 2 21:36:29 2008
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 
     [story]
         [part]
-            story= _ "True to his word, once Earl Lanbec'h had been slain, 
Howgarth III dispersed the Earl's forces and withdrew them from orcish 
territory. For his part Kapou'e withdrew from Dorset and dispersed the Great 
Horde. However, before the horde was dispersed he appointed three more shamans 
- with the unanimous consent of all - to make the Great Council complete again."
+            story= _ "True to his word, once Lanbec'h had been slain, Howgarth 
III dispersed the Earl's forces and withdrew them from orcish territory. For 
his part Kapou'e withdrew from Dorset and dispersed the Great Horde. However, 
before the horde was dispersed he appointed three more shamans - with the 
consent of all - to make the Great Council complete again."
             background=sotbe.png
             music=traveling_minstrels.ogg
         [/part]
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
         [/part]
 
         [part]
-            story= _ "During the eighth year of Kapou'e's reign, and then 
again in the fourteenth, the orcish territories were once again invaded, first 
from the elves, and then once again from the humans. Almost as a testament to 
the power of the orcs united - both attacks were quickly and decisively 
crushed, even before the Northern Alliance could intervene."
+            story= _ "During the eighth year of Kapou'e's reign, and then 
again in the fourteenth, the orcish territories were once again invaded, first 
by the elves, and then once again by the humans. As testament to the power of 
the orcs united under Kapou'e, both attacks were quickly and decisively 
crushed, even before the Northern Alliance could intervene."
             background=sotbe.png
         [/part]
 


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