Author: ivanovic
Date: Tue Sep 30 13:48:57 2008
New Revision: 29783

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=29783&view=rev
Log:
some more text refinements and fixes

Modified:
    trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/_main.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/2_The_Chase.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/5_Epilog.cfg

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/_main.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/_main.cfg?rev=29783&r1=29782&r2=29783&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/_main.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/_main.cfg Tue Sep 30 13:48:57 2008
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     difficulties=EASY,HARD
     difficulty_descriptions={MENU_IMG_TXT2 
"units/human-loyalists/horseman-moving.png~RC(magenta>red)" _"Horseman" 
_"(Beginner)"} +
     ";" + {MENU_IMG_TXT2 
"units/human-loyalists/grand-knight.png~RC(magenta>red)" _"Knight" 
_"(Challenging)"}
-    description= _ "An evil mage is threatening the local village and its 
inhabitants. When their leader Bjarn sends for aid from his brother Arne, he is 
victorious, but Bjarn himself is kidnapped. Can you rescue him?
+    description= _ "An evil mage is threatening the small village Maghre and 
its inhabitants. The villages mage Bjarn send for his brother to help, but not 
all goes as planned. Can you help?
 
 (Novice level, 4 scenarios; the 'Hard' version may challenge more experienced 
players.)"
 

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/2_The_Chase.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/2_The_Chase.cfg?rev=29783&r1=29782&r2=29783&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/2_The_Chase.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/2_The_Chase.cfg Tue Sep 30 
13:48:57 2008
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
             background=story/Two_Brothers_M2P1.png
         [/part]
         [part]
-            story=_ "Not knowing those rumors, Arne made to follow them, 
although his horsemen would be at disadvantage if being attacked in the forest."
+            story=_ "Not knowing those rumors, Arne followed them, although 
his horsemen would be at disadvantage if being attacked in the forest."
             background=story/Two_Brothers_M2P1.png
         [/part]
     [/story]
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
             message= _ "Come on men. A bracing walk in the woods never hurt 
anyone, did it?"
         [/message]
         [message]
-            speaker=Speaker
+            role=speaker
             message= _ "But old tales talk about mighty ghosts ruling this 
forest. They kill everyone who dares to enter."
         [/message]
         [message]
@@ -291,11 +291,11 @@
         [/message]
         [message]
             role=speaker
-            message= _ "I am glad that we at least don't have to face ghosts. 
But they are in advantage since with our horses we will have problems between 
the trees."
-        [/message]
-        [message]
-            speaker=Arne
-            message= _ "Pah, just stay on the paths and let our spearmen and 
bowmen take care of those who oppose us. I have faced greater evil than those 
amateurs."
+            message= _ "I am glad that we at least don't have to face ghosts. 
But those Elves are in advantage since with our horses we will have problems 
between the trees."
+        [/message]
+        [message]
+            speaker=Arne
+            message= _ "Pah, just stay on the paths and let our spearmen and 
bowmen take care of those who dare to oppose us. I have faced greater evil than 
those amateurs."
         [/message]
     [/event]
 

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/5_Epilog.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/5_Epilog.cfg?rev=29783&r1=29782&r2=29783&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/5_Epilog.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/5_Epilog.cfg Tue Sep 30 
13:48:57 2008
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
             background=story/Two_Brothers_M4P1_the_end.png
         [/part]
         [part]
-            story= _ "Arne and his men left the village assured that it was in 
good hands with his brother protecting and guiding the villagers. On their 
journeys they faces several other obstacles. Some tales even mention Arnes name 
together with the famous elvish lord Kalenz, but this is a different story..."
+            story= _ "Arne and his men left the village assured that it was in 
good hands with his brother protecting and guiding the villagers. On their 
journeys they faced several other obstacles. Some tales even mention Arnes name 
together with the famous elvish lord Kalenz, but this is a different story..."
             background=story/Two_Brothers_M4P1_the_end.png
         [/part]
 


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