Author: ivanovic
Date: Mon Sep 13 14:47:55 2010
New Revision: 46454

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=46454&view=rev
Log:
fix some of the parts that are not following the new rules for apostrophes, 
elipses and the likes
@Espreon and Simon: please have a look at it to make sure it is a) correct and 
b) that no things are missing
what I know is missing: conversion of - to the correct dashes

Modified:
    trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/01_Rooting_Out_a_Mage.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/02_The_Chase.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/03_Guarded_Castle.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/04_Return_to_the_Village.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/05_Epilogue.cfg

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/01_Rooting_Out_a_Mage.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/01_Rooting_Out_a_Mage.cfg?rev=46454&r1=46453&r2=46454&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/01_Rooting_Out_a_Mage.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/01_Rooting_Out_a_Mage.cfg Mon 
Sep 13 14:47:55 2010
@@ -28,19 +28,19 @@
     # least until the beginning of HttT in 517 YW.
     #
     # Maghre has to be within reach of the orcs, but in a time and
-    # place where there haven't been orc raids for generations. I (ESR)
+    # place where there haven’t been orc raids for generations. I (ESR)
     # think this limits us to *western* Wesnoth, orc raids having been a
-    # chronic problem in the northeast even during the Kingdom's strongest
+    # chronic problem in the northeast even during the Kingdom’s strongest
     # periods. The logical time would be shortly after the death of
-    # Haldric IV in 350, the beginning of the First Dark Age.  I'm arbitrarily
+    # Haldric IV in 350, the beginning of the First Dark Age.  I’m 
arbitrarily
     # setting it at 363; Kalenz began his wanderings ten years later, so the
-    # timing for Arne to meet him later in life isn't bad.  (Later moved 
-    # to 363 so the timing of the Epilog A-Red's backstory changes works 
+    # timing for Arne to meet him later in life isn’t bad.  (Later moved 
+    # to 363 so the timing of the Epilog A-Red’s backstory changes works 
     # better.)
 
     # Placing the campaign is a little trickier.  Our main textual
     # clue is that there is a dense wood, said by legend to be
-    # haunted, a few days' ride north.  Later, the boss's keep is said to
+    # haunted, a few days’ ride north.  Later, the boss’s keep is said to
     # be still further north.  Neither of these directions has plot importance,
     # but they do suggest a locale for Maghre - near the Grey Woods.  The
     # battle maps exclude it from being in a featureless plain, though;
@@ -233,11 +233,11 @@
         [/message]
         [message]
             speaker=Bjarn
-            message= _ "I will go stealthily with a handful of our best scouts 
and woodsmen. While you demonstrate against him and kill his creatures, I will 
try to defeat Mordak himself with magic at an unguarded moment. You shall be 
the right hand, I the left...aye, brother?"
-        [/message]
-        [message]
-            speaker=Arne
-            message= _ "...Aye. Just make sure you're there when we need you."
+            message= _ "I will go stealthily with a handful of our best scouts 
and woodsmen. While you demonstrate against him and kill his creatures, I will 
try to defeat Mordak himself with magic at an unguarded moment. You shall be 
the right hand, I the left... aye, brother?"
+        [/message]
+        [message]
+            speaker=Arne
+            message= _ "... Aye. Just make sure you’re there when we need 
you."
         [/message]
         [kill]
             id=Bjarn
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@
         [/message]
         [message]
             speaker=Arne
-            message= _ "No...No. This is something else. I'm worried about 
him...but right now it means we have to deal with this Mordak ourselves."
+            message= _ "No... No. This is something else. I’m worried about 
him... but right now it means we have to deal with this Mordak ourselves."
         [/message]
     [/event]
 

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/02_The_Chase.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/02_The_Chase.cfg?rev=46454&r1=46453&r2=46454&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/02_The_Chase.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/02_The_Chase.cfg Mon Sep 13 
14:47:55 2010
@@ -35,13 +35,13 @@
             story=_ "16 V, 363 YW
 Excerpt from the journal of Arne of Maghre
 
-We've been searching three days for Bjarn, and turned up nothing. My best 
hunch was to head north into the borderlands, where the necromancer's minions 
could safely hide; everywhere else is more farmland. At first I thought the 
search might be useless, but late in the first day we found a set of tracks. 
Some of them had been made by skeletal feet.
-
-We're close enough to be certain now: those tracks are heading into the Grey 
Woods. No one from Maghre or any of the other villages has gone into that 
forest in living memory. Stories have been passed down for generations warning 
against it. Supposedly the place is haunted by lost souls who hunger for the 
living, and anyone who dies there is doomed to join them.
-
-But I'm past superstitions now; I've seen enough of the world to guess at the 
truth behind these sorts of tales. The forest is home to elves--unfriendly 
ones, if the stories have any basis at all. I worry for my men; horses don't 
fight well in forests, and the elves will be more dangerous in their own 
territory. But there are things that need done and questions that need 
answered. Something bigger is happening. One necromancer terrorizing townsfolk 
is nothing new, but why didn't his servants scatter when he was killed? Where 
are they headed now? And most importantly, why did they take Bjarn with them?
-
-Besides...I want my brother back."
+We’ve been searching three days for Bjarn, and turned up nothing. My best 
hunch was to head north into the borderlands, where the necromancer’s minions 
could safely hide; everywhere else is more farmland. At first I thought the 
search might be useless, but late in the first day we found a set of tracks. 
Some of them had been made by skeletal feet.
+
+We’re close enough to be certain now: those tracks are heading into the Grey 
Woods. No one from Maghre or any of the other villages has gone into that 
forest in living memory. Stories have been passed down for generations warning 
against it. Supposedly the place is haunted by lost souls who hunger for the 
living, and anyone who dies there is doomed to join them.
+
+But I’m past superstitions now; I’ve seen enough of the world to guess at 
the truth behind these sorts of tales. The forest is home to elves--unfriendly 
ones, if the stories have any basis at all. I worry for my men; horses don’t 
fight well in forests, and the elves will be more dangerous in their own 
territory. But there are things that need done and questions that need 
answered. Something bigger is happening. One necromancer terrorizing townsfolk 
is nothing new, but why didn’t his servants scatter when he was killed? Where 
are they headed now? And most importantly, why did they take Bjarn with them?
+
+Besides... I want my brother back."
         [/part]
         [part]
             show_title=yes
@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@
         [/message]
         [message]
             speaker=Arne
-            message= _ "I'm no longer sure. What's between us remains, but 
knowing someone else has lain hands on him changes things. Mount up, and let's 
get moving."
+            message= _ "I’m no longer sure. What’s between us remains, but 
knowing someone else has lain hands on him changes things. Mount up, and 
let’s get moving."
         [/message]
 
 #ifdef EASY

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/03_Guarded_Castle.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/03_Guarded_Castle.cfg?rev=46454&r1=46453&r2=46454&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/03_Guarded_Castle.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/03_Guarded_Castle.cfg Mon Sep 
13 14:47:55 2010
@@ -47,11 +47,11 @@
 
 The last of Mordak’s servants arrived this morning bearing the news of his 
death, as well as a bundle so well-bound it was barely recognizable as a man. 
Mordak was always reckless. This whole desperate scheme was his, and I suppose 
I could blame him for everything that we have suffered through if it still 
mattered. It was he who brought the wrath of the orcs down on us, too. But all 
the same, he managed to accomplish what he set out to do. I still cannot 
believe the finality of what has happened; until now we had always managed to 
make it through somehow.
 
-We had hoped to deliver the mage to Tairach in return for our lives. I do not 
know what the warlord wants with this man, but he matches the description. I 
suppose that Mordak’s plan would have worked perfectly if not for the 
appearance of the horse warriors. Now they are coming here, led by a man 
rumored to be this mage's brother. If that is true, he will stop at nothing, no 
more than would I if they held Mordak.
+We had hoped to deliver the mage to Tairach in return for our lives. I do not 
know what the warlord wants with this man, but he matches the description. I 
suppose that Mordak’s plan would have worked perfectly if not for the 
appearance of the horse warriors. Now they are coming here, led by a man 
rumored to be this mage’s brother. If that is true, he will stop at nothing, 
no more than would I if they held Mordak.
 
 I have done what I can to fortify this dilapidated castle. The orcs who came 
with us stand guard at the gates, and I am gathering all of my servants to me 
in the inner sanctum. But ill fate awaits. Whether I defeat this horse-warrior 
or no, the orcs will still come for me; they have been scouring the borderlands 
and raiding the northern farm country in search of us.
 
-Yet for some reason I fear these brothers more. If Mordak were here it would 
be different, but we are broken...and these two men are whole. In each other, 
in the ties that bind them, they have strength."
+Yet for some reason I fear these brothers more. If Mordak were here it would 
be different, but we are broken... and these two men are whole. In each other, 
in the ties that bind them, they have strength."
         [/part]
     [/story]
 
@@ -359,7 +359,7 @@
                 [/remove_shroud]
                 [message]
                     speaker=Arne
-                    message= _ "The adept didn't lead us astray after all. 
I'll keep my word, distasteful as it may be; cut him loose, and let's be rid of 
him."
+                    message= _ "The adept didn’t lead us astray after all. 
I’ll keep my word, distasteful as it may be; cut him loose, and let’s be 
rid of him."
                 [/message]
                 # Perhaps the Adept is so grateful for Arne’s mercy that he
                 # offers to stay with the player’s force. In this case the
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@
         [/filter]
         [message]
             speaker=unit
-            message= _ "Your hand or Tairach's, death is still death...(argh)"
+            message= _ "Your hand or Tairach’s, death is still death... 
(argh)"
         [/message]
         [kill]
             id=Rotharik
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@
         [/kill]
         [message]
             speaker=Arne
-            message= _ "'Tairach'? Who or what is Tairach?"
+            message= _ "’Tairach’? Who or what is Tairach?"
         [/message]
         [message]
             speaker=second_unit
@@ -779,7 +779,7 @@
             [then]
                 [message]
                     speaker=Bjarn
-                    message= _ "It's good to see you, Arne."
+                    message= _ "It’s good to see you, Arne."
                 [/message]
                 [message]
                     speaker=Arne
@@ -847,7 +847,7 @@
                 [/terrain]
                 [message]
                     speaker=Bjarn
-                    message= _ "Thank you for saving me. I...was not certain 
you would come."
+                    message= _ "Thank you for saving me. I... was not certain 
you would come."
                 [/message]
                 [message]
                     speaker=Arne
@@ -855,11 +855,11 @@
                 [/message]
                 [message]
                     speaker=Bjarn
-                    message= _ "It's not that. Perhaps I deserved to rot here. 
I failed you. I failed you again."
-                [/message]
-                [message]
-                    speaker=Arne
-                    message= _ "That is as may be. But you are my brother 
still And...I never doubted you would have come for me."
+                    message= _ "It’s not that. Perhaps I deserved to rot 
here. I failed you. I failed you again."
+                [/message]
+                [message]
+                    speaker=Arne
+                    message= _ "That is as may be. But you are my brother 
still And... I never doubted you would have come for me."
                 [/message]
                 [message]
                     speaker=Arne

Modified: 
trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/04_Return_to_the_Village.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/04_Return_to_the_Village.cfg?rev=46454&r1=46453&r2=46454&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/04_Return_to_the_Village.cfg 
(original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/04_Return_to_the_Village.cfg 
Mon Sep 13 14:47:55 2010
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
             story=_"27 V, 363 YW
 Excerpt from the journal of Bjarn of Maghre
 
-Almost home now. The last week has been full of mixed feelings for 
me--blissful and difficult by turns. It was wonderful to be out of that dungeon 
cell and in the sunlight again without the threat of death or worse hanging 
over my head...but with that behind me, I turned to the almost equally daunting 
task of making amends with my brother.
+Almost home now. The last week has been full of mixed feelings for 
me--blissful and difficult by turns. It was wonderful to be out of that dungeon 
cell and in the sunlight again without the threat of death or worse hanging 
over my head... but with that behind me, I turned to the almost equally 
daunting task of making amends with my brother.
 
 Arne had largely forgiven me by the time he freed me from my cell. All the 
same, it has taken all of the past week for us to rebuild the sense of comfort 
in each other we once had. It is fortunate that we have been able to take our 
time getting back--we gave the Grey Woods a wide berth, and on our way around 
it we traveled through some truly beautiful countryside. It has given us plenty 
of time to talk.
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 
 I can hardly blame Arne for having taken their deaths ill, and I can never 
undo the wrong that I have done, but I suppose that time heals some things. We 
return to the village as brothers once more.
 
-But I am still troubled. I wonder...is this sense of foreboding I feel merely 
a remnant of my time locked away in that dungeon, or is it a sign of something 
real?"
+But I am still troubled. I wonder... is this sense of foreboding I feel merely 
a remnant of my time locked away in that dungeon, or is it a sign of something 
real?"
         [/part]
     [/story]
 
@@ -178,15 +178,15 @@
         [/filter]
         [message]
             speaker=unit
-            message= _ "We're almost there!"
-        [/message]
-        [message]
-            speaker=Bjarn
-            message= _ "That warlord! It's..."
-        [/message]
-        [message]
-            speaker=Arne
-            message= _ "Yes, I'd know that face anywhere. Especially after 
what you did to it."
+            message= _ "We’re almost there!"
+        [/message]
+        [message]
+            speaker=Bjarn
+            message= _ "That warlord! It’s..."
+        [/message]
+        [message]
+            speaker=Arne
+            message= _ "Yes, I’d know that face anywhere. Especially after 
what you did to it."
         [/message]
         [message]
             speaker=Bjarn
@@ -198,11 +198,11 @@
         [/message]
         [message]
             speaker=Bjarn
-            message= _ "Let's finish what we started, brother."
-        [/message]
-        [message]
-            speaker=Arne
-            message= _ "Aye. I'll be the right arm, and you'll be the left. 
Let's go!"
+            message= _ "Let’s finish what we started, brother."
+        [/message]
+        [message]
+            speaker=Arne
+            message= _ "Aye. I’ll be the right arm, and you’ll be the 
left. Let’s go!"
         [/message]
     [/event]
 
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@
         name=enemies defeated
         [message]
             speaker=Arne
-            message= _ "It is finished. We've defeated him at last. It was 
good to have you at my side, Bjarn."
+            message= _ "It is finished. We’ve defeated him at last. It was 
good to have you at my side, Bjarn."
         [/message]
         [message]
             speaker=Bjarn

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/05_Epilogue.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/05_Epilogue.cfg?rev=46454&r1=46453&r2=46454&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/05_Epilogue.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Two_Brothers/scenarios/05_Epilogue.cfg Mon Sep 13 
14:47:55 2010
@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@
 
 It has been more difficult to stay away in those two years, but I have my 
calling and Bjarn has his, and we have had little opportunity to meet again. 
But as the company and I are passing through this part of the kingdom with a 
new patron, I have asked leave of him to visit my brother and he gave it.
 
-This patron is, of all things, an elf. I never thought I'd befriend one, but 
he is less arrogant the rest. Kalenz, he calls himself. He's seen too much; I 
can tell that just by meeting his eyes. I think we will have to work for our 
pay soon.
+This patron is, of all things, an elf. I never thought I’d befriend one, but 
he is less arrogant the rest. Kalenz, he calls himself. He’s seen too much; I 
can tell that just by meeting his eyes. I think we will have to work for our 
pay soon.
 
-In the meantime, though, it's good to relax and enjoy the peace."
+In the meantime, though, it’s good to relax and enjoy the peace."
         [/part]
     [/story]
 


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