Author: esr
Date: Mon Sep 13 19:34:46 2010
New Revision: 46471

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=46471&view=rev
Log:
Moore textr polishing for LoW.

Modified:
    trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/abilities.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/characters.cfg
    trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/deaths.cfg

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/abilities.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/abilities.cfg?rev=46471&r1=46470&r2=46471&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/abilities.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/abilities.cfg Mon Sep 13 
19:34:46 2010
@@ -30,16 +30,10 @@
     [heals]
         value=4
         id=heals_kalenz        
-        #TODO ESR
         name= _"heals Kalenz +4"
         female_name=_"female^heals Kalenz +4"
         description=_"Heals +4:
-If a Shyde has developed a special bond to a person her healing abilities 
increase for him.
-
-Allows Cleodil to heal extra points to Kalenz at the beginning of our turn.
-
-A unit cared for by this healer may heal up to 4 extra HP per turn, or stop 
poison from taking effect for that turn.
-A poisoned unit cannot be cured of its poison by a healer, and must seek the 
care of a village or a unit that can cure."
+If a shyde has developed a special bond to a person her healing abilities 
increase for him.  This allows Cleodil to give Kalenz extra points of healing 
at the beginning of our turn."
         affect_self=no
         poison=cured
         [affect_adjacent]

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/characters.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/characters.cfg?rev=46471&r1=46470&r2=46471&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/characters.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/characters.cfg Mon Sep 13 
19:34:46 2010
@@ -148,18 +148,15 @@
         [/filter_second]
         [message]
             speaker=unit
-            #TODO ESR
-            message= _ "Prepared to die, elven witch!"
+            message= _ "Prepare to die, elven witch!"
         [/message]
         [message]
             id=Kalenz
-            #TODO ESR
-            message= _ "Don't dare to hurt her!"
+            message= _ "I will slay any who harms her without mercy."
         [/message]
         [message]
-            #TODO ESR
             id=Cleodil
-            message= _ "Whatever!"
+            message= _ "Nor will you find me an easy foe!"
         [/message]
     [/event]
     [event]
@@ -168,19 +165,12 @@
             id=Cleodil
         [/filter_second]
         [message]
-            #TODO ESR
             id=Cleodil
-            message= _ "Ouch!"
+            message= _ "I am wounded!"
         [/message]
         [message]
-            #TODO ESR
-            speaker=unit
-            message= _ "Ha ha!"
-        [/message]
-        [message]
-            #TODO ESR
             id=Kalenz
-            message= _ "Blah Blah!"
+            message= _ "Cleodil! No! I will aid you."
         [/message]
     [/event]
 #enddef

Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/deaths.cfg
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/deaths.cfg?rev=46471&r1=46470&r2=46471&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/deaths.cfg (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Legend_of_Wesmere/utils/deaths.cfg Mon Sep 13 19:34:46 
2010
@@ -136,11 +136,10 @@
         #TODO make this macro work
         #{FILTER_LOYALS}
     [/filter]
-    #TODO enable after the string frezze
-    #[message]
-    #    speaker=unit
-    #    message= _ "This is a stub! My service ends here My Lord." #TODO ESR
-    #[/message]
+    [message]
+        speaker=unit
+        message= _ "I grieve that I have failed you, my lord Kalenz..."
+    [/message]
     [message]
         id=Kalenz
         message= _ "Farewell $unit.name. Your loyal service won’t be 
forgotten."


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