On Mon, 24 Oct 2005 06:45:19 +0300, Ian Hickson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

On Mon, 24 Oct 2005, Lachlan Hunt wrote:
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Oops.

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Heh. So I had actually written that, then deleted the word "improve" to
find a better word (improve from what?), then forgot that I hadn't
finished the sentence. I suck.

  It is possible to track users without this feature, but authors are
  urged to use the |ping| attribute so that the user agent can optimise
  the user experience.

...is what I have now. If someone can find a better way of phrasing that
please let me know. It's what I mean, but it sounds kooky.


My version:

   It is possible to track users without this feature, but authors are
encouraged to use the |ping| attribute so that the user agent can improve
   the user experience.

Urged is ... a bit too "pushy". Also, "optimise" is not the appropriate word. I consider Lachlan's suggestion better: "improve", because that's what actually happends (improvement, not optimisation).

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