https://bugzilla.wikimedia.org/show_bug.cgi?id=60070
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Bug ID: 60070
Summary: Unclear definition for "Aging charts"
Product: Analytics
Version: unspecified
Hardware: All
URL: http://korma.wmflabs.org/browser/demographics.html
OS: All
Status: NEW
Severity: normal
Priority: Unprioritized
Component: Tech community metrics
Assignee: [email protected]
Reporter: [email protected]
CC: [email protected], [email protected],
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Classification: Unclassified
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"Aging charts show the age of the contributors still active using the date of
their first contribution in the different data sources."
Syntax is poor, I first thought "using" was subordinate to "[who are] active"
while it's a subordinate of "show" (neither makes much sense): at least add a
comma before "using", or better make it another sentence because it has no
relation to the first.
Additionally, "using the date of their first contribution in the different data
sources" is a useless detail, while you forget to say *who* is considered
"still active": people still active in the last 3 months? 6? last year?
Mandatory reading:
http://infodisiac.com/blog/2009/12/new-editors-are-joining-english-wikipedia-in-droves/
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