The larger point is that this isn't the ideal forum for finding editorial assistance. I'm surprised no one has yet responded with WP:SOFIXIT<http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:SOFIXIT>. At a glance, the page looks OK, if not great. Perhaps there are indeed serious problems with it, but being "un-sourced" as you first wrote does not seem to be the key problem. So fix it! You seem to have the interest and knowledge. That plus a little initiative is (often) all that separates a bad article from a good one.
On Mon, Feb 21, 2011 at 7:22 AM, Thomas Dalton <thomas.dal...@gmail.com>wrote: > On 21 February 2011 00:52, michael west <michaw...@gmail.com> wrote: > > No Thomas, there are problems with (a) the East Pakistan/West Pakistan > war > > (Bhhutto was a memeber of government and never appeared on TV - it was > the > > government leader who told of West Pakistan's capitulation) > > I made no comment as to the accuracy of the article, only your claim > that it is un-sourced. There are numerous sources in that article. The > sources may be incorrect or the article may be misinterpreting the > sources, but the sources are there. > > _______________________________________________ > WikiEN-l mailing list > WikiEN-l@lists.wikimedia.org > To unsubscribe from this mailing list, visit: > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/wikien-l > _______________________________________________ WikiEN-l mailing list WikiEN-l@lists.wikimedia.org To unsubscribe from this mailing list, visit: https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/wikien-l
