It is indeed too promotional in language, but even more fundamentally, it
describes what seems to me like a non-notable business.  If it is being
written by someone involved with the business (or paid by them), it is also
violating the Conflict of Interest guidelines.  If it is written by someone
not involved with the business, it's just unfortunate that this new editor
picked a non-notable topic to begin with.  There are plenty of other topics
to write about, e.g. from WikiProject Ghana:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Ghana#Tasks

I am certainly not motivated to assist in writing this non-notable article,
and I would not recommend any of you spend time on it either, except to
help the author understand it's not notable.

    A.



On Thu, Nov 3, 2016 at 5:32 AM Sandister Tei <[email protected]> wrote:

> Please I don't understand what help you need.
>
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> On Wed, Nov 2, 2016 at 4:03 PM, Justice Okai-Allotey <[email protected]
> > wrote:
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> Started working on the article the history side has no links attached to
> it.
>
>
>
> On 2 November 2016 at 15:50, Nkansah Rexford <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>
> This article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Iamjunie07/sandbox is
> currently ongoing. It sounds too promotional to me. It is an article by a
> new editor, and he's working on it in the sandbox.
>
> Help fix some of the promotional tone on the article before he could push
> to main wikipedia.
>
> thanks
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