Thank you for your correction, Kasia - it now reads "In order to avoid a potential bias assessing their own proposal, FDC have asked Wikimedia Deutschland (WMDE) to do the staff assessment of the WMF's proposal." [1]
If I may suggest, since the FDC didn't submit the proposal that was assessed (the WMF did), that you can simplify this further by eliminating the first clause, and simply saying "FDC have asked Wikimedia Deutschland (WMDE) to do the staff assessment of the WMF's proposal." The FDC can explain further itself why it has asked WMDE to do the assessment, if it desires. Risker/Anne [1] https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=Grants:APG/Proposals/2013-2014_round2/Wikimedia_Foundation/Proposal_assessment_by_Wikimedia_Deutschland_e.V.&diff=0&oldid=8460331 On 9 May 2014 11:07, Kasia Odrozek <kasia.odro...@wikimedia.de> wrote: > Hi Risker, > > It was indeed an unintentional mistake and thank you for pointing it out. I > have corrected it in the assessment. > > Best, > Kasia > > > 2014-05-09 17:00 GMT+02:00 Risker <risker...@gmail.com>: > > > Actually, Dariusz, if the FDC (which is not WMF/FDC staff) made the > > request, then the sentence is incorrect. As it is currently written, > > it states that WMF/ FDC staff contacted WMDE directly made the request, > and > > implies that the FDC itself had no role in this decision. > > > > The WMF/FDC staff have made it very clear that they have not completed > any > > assessment report in relation to the WMF request. [1] > > > > The sentence in the WMDE assessment should be corrected. > > > > Risker/Anne > > > > > > > > [1] > > > > > https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Grants:APG/Proposals/2013-2014_round2/Wikimedia_Foundation/Staff_proposal_assessment > > > > > > > > > > On 9 May 2014 10:51, Dariusz Jemielniak <dar...@alk.edu.pl> wrote: > > > > > hi, > > > > > > let me clarify - asking WMDE was an independent decision of the FDC, > and > > > not of the FDC staff. The FDC reached out to WMDE regarding this > request, > > > and the FDC staff has assisted us since then. The sentence is thus > true, > > > although may sound misleading. > > > > > > best, > > > > > > dj "pundit" > > > > > > > > > On Fri, May 9, 2014 at 4:27 PM, Risker <risker...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > > > > Thank you Winifred. These appear to be very good, and I largely > agree > > > with > > > > the assessment. > > > > > > > > I know that the WMF FDC staff did not review the WMF submission; it > was > > > > partially reviewed by WMDE. In the first sentence of the > introduction > > to > > > > their report they say "In order to avoid a potential bias assessing > > their > > > > own proposal, WMF/FDC staff have asked Wikimedia Deutschland (WMDE) > to > > do > > > > the staff assessment of the WMF's proposal."[1] This is not > consistent > > > with > > > > what the FDC chair and members told us in the thread on Wikimedia-L. > > Did > > > > the WMF/FDC staff request that WMDE do the assessment? > > > > > > > > Risker/Anne > > > > > > > > [1] > > > > > > > > > > > > > > https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Grants:APG/Proposals/2013-2014_round2/Wikimedia_Foundation/Proposal_assessment_by_Wikimedia_Deutschland_e.V > > > > . > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > Wikimedia-l mailing list, guidelines at: > > > > https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Mailing_lists/Guidelines > > > > Wikimedia-l@lists.wikimedia.org > > > > Unsubscribe: > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/wikimedia-l, > > > > <mailto:wikimedia-l-requ...@lists.wikimedia.org?subject=unsubscribe> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > > > > __________________________ > > > dr hab. 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