This patch fixes some typos reported by Rich, and a few grammatical
errors I found while fixing it.
UPDATED to include some more fixes.  Rename 'testing results' to 'test 
results', and remove some odd capitalizations.



KGJ skrev:



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Index: testResults.php
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/wine/appdb/testResults.php,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -p -r1.3 testResults.php
--- testResults.php     23 Jan 2006 02:10:31 -0000      1.3
+++ testResults.php     30 Apr 2006 11:48:05 -0000
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<?php
/**************************************************/
-/* code to submit, view and resubmit Test Results */
+/* Code to submit, view and resubmit Test Results */
/**************************************************/
include("path.php");
@@ -111,10 +111,10 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])


        //help
-        echo "<p>This is the Screen for imputting testing information so that 
others looking at the database will know \n";
-        echo "what was working or a particular release of Wine.</p>\n";
+        echo "<p>This is the screen for inputting testing information so that 
others looking at the database will know \n";
+        echo "what was working in a particular release of Wine.</p>\n";
        echo "<p>Please be as detailed as you can.</p>\n";
-        echo "<p>If you can not find your distribution on the list of existing 
Distributions please add it add it in the \n";
+        echo "<p>If you can not find your distribution in the list of existing 
Distributions, please add it in the \n";
echo "field provided.</p>\n\n";
        if(!empty($errors))
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not def
    {
        // help
        echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 
cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
-        echo "<p>This is the list of Test Results waiting for submition, or to be 
deleted.</p>\n";
+        echo "<p>This is the list of Test Results waiting for submission, or to be 
deleted.</p>\n";
        echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can 
delete or edit and\n";
        echo "re-submit it into the AppDB .<br>\n";
        echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not def
        echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 
cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
        echo "<p>This is the list of Rejected Test Results waiting for re-submition or 
deletion.</p>\n";
Shouldn't this line be also:

echo "<p>This is the list of Rejected Test Results waiting for re-submission or 
deletion.</p>\n";

or

echo "<p>This is the list of rejected Test Results waiting for re-submission or 
deletion.</p>\n";

? OK, that's not wrong with your patch but with the original file. I
just noticed it while reading...
Thanks! I guess I should have read through the file a bit more thoroughly . . .
Please use the new patch instead.

        echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can 
delete or edit and re-submit it into \n";
-        echo "the AppDB .<br>\n";
+        echo "the AppDB.<br>\n";
        echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";

        $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Rejected Testing Results");


Greetings KGJ




Index: testResults.php
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/wine/appdb/testResults.php,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -p -r1.3 testResults.php
--- testResults.php     23 Jan 2006 02:10:31 -0000      1.3
+++ testResults.php     26 May 2006 12:24:28 -0000
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?php
 /**************************************************/
-/* code to submit, view and resubmit Test Results */
+/* Code to submit, view and resubmit test results */
 /**************************************************/
  
 include("path.php");
@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
         $oTest->iVersionId = $_REQUEST['iVersionId'];
     $errors = "";
 
-    // Submit or Resubmit the new testing results
+    // Submit or resubmit the new test results
     if (($_REQUEST['sub'] == 'Submit') || ($_REQUEST['sub'] == 'Resubmit'))
     {
         $errors = $oTest->CheckOutputEditorInput();
-        $oTest->GetOutputEditorValues(); // retrieve the values from the 
current $_REQUEST 
+        $oTest->GetOutputEditorValues(); // Retrieve the values from the 
current $_REQUEST 
         if(empty($errors))
         {
             if(!$_REQUEST['iDistributionId'])
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
         }
     }
 
-    // Delete testing results
+    // Delete test results
     if ($_REQUEST['sub'] == 'Delete')
     {
         if(is_numeric($_REQUEST['iTestingId']))
@@ -65,10 +65,10 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
         redirect($_SERVER['PHP_SELF']);
     }
 
-    // is this an old test?
+    // Is this an old test?
     if(is_numeric($_REQUEST['iTestingId']))
     {
-        // make sure the user has permission to view this testing result
+        // Make sure the user has permission to view these test results
         $oVersion = new Version($oTest->iVersionId);
         if(!$_SESSION['current']->hasPriv("admin") && 
            !$_SESSION['current']->hasAppVersionModifyPermission($oVersion)&&
@@ -92,29 +92,29 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
         switch($oTest->sQueued)
         {
         case "new":
-            apidb_header("Submit new testing results for ".$sVersionInfo);
+            apidb_header("Submit new test results for ".$sVersionInfo);
             $oTest->sTestedDate = date('Y-m-d H:i:s');
             break;
         case "true":
-            apidb_header("Edit new testing results for ".$sVersionInfo);
+            apidb_header("Edit new test results for ".$sVersionInfo);
             break;
         case "rejected":
-            apidb_header("Resubmit testing results for ".$sVersionInfo);
+            apidb_header("Resubmit test results for ".$sVersionInfo);
             break;
         case "False":
-            apidb_header("Edit testing results for ".$sVersionInfo);
+            apidb_header("Edit test results for ".$sVersionInfo);
             break;
         default:
-            apidb_header("Edit testing results for ");
+            apidb_header("Edit test results for ");
         }
         echo '<form name="qform" action="'.$_SERVER['PHP_SELF'].'" 
method="post" enctype="multipart/form-data">',"\n";
 
 
         //help
-        echo "<p>This is the Screen for imputting testing information so that 
others looking at the database will know \n";
-        echo "what was working or a particular release of Wine.</p>\n";
+        echo "<p>This is the screen for inputting testing information so that 
others looking at the database will know \n";
+        echo "what was working in a particular release of Wine.</p>\n";
         echo "<p>Please be as detailed as you can.</p>\n";
-        echo "<p>If you can not find your distribution on the list of existing 
Distributions please add it add it in the \n";
+        echo "<p>If you can not find your distribution in the list of existing 
distributions, please add it in the \n";
         echo "field provided.</p>\n\n";        
 
         if(!empty($errors))
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
             echo '<p></p>',"\n";
         }
    
-        // View Testing Details
+        // View test details
         $oTest->OutputEditor($_REQUEST['sDistribution'],true);
 
         echo '<a 
href="'.BASE."appview.php?versionId=".$oTest->iVersionId.'">Back to 
Version</a>';
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
         echo '<tr valign=top><td class=color3 align=center colspan=2>',"\n";
 
 
-        // Submit Buttons
+        // Submit buttons
         switch($oTest->sQueued)
         {
         case "new":
@@ -154,56 +154,56 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub'])
     else 
     {
         // error no sub!
-        addmsg("Internal Routine Not Found!!", "red");
+        addmsg("Internal routine not found!!", "red");
         redirect($_SERVER['PHP_SELF']);
     } 
 } 
-else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not defined, display the Testing results 
queue page 
+else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not defined, display the test results queue 
page 
 {
-    apidb_header("Testing Results");
+    apidb_header("Test results");
 
-    // Get queued testing results.
+    // Get queued test results.
     $oTest = new TestData();
     $hResult = $oTest->getTestingQueue("true");
 
     if(!$hResult)
     {
-        // no Tests in queue
-        echo html_frame_start("Submitted Testing Results","90%");
-        echo '<p><b>The Submitted Testng Results Queue is empty.</b></p>',"\n";
+        // no tests in queue
+        echo html_frame_start("Submitted test results","90%");
+        echo '<p><b>The submitted test results queue is empty.</b></p>',"\n";
         echo html_frame_end("&nbsp;");         
     }
     else
     {
         // help
         echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 
cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
-        echo "<p>This is the list of Test Results waiting for submition, or to 
be deleted.</p>\n";
+        echo "<p>This is the list of test results waiting to be approved or 
deleted.</p>\n";
         echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you 
can delete or edit and\n";
-        echo "re-submit it into the AppDB .<br>\n";
+        echo "resubmit it into the AppDB.<br>\n";
         echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
 
-        $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Submitted Testing Results");
+        $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Submitted test results");
     }
-    // Get rejected testing results.
+    // Get rejected test results.
     $hResult = $oTest->getTestingQueue("rejected");
 
     if(!$hResult || !mysql_num_rows($hResult))
     {
-        //no Test Results in queue
-        echo html_frame_start("Rejected Testing Results","90%");
-        echo '<p><b>The Rejected Testng Results Queue is empty.</b></p>',"\n";
+        //no test results in queue
+        echo html_frame_start("Rejected test results","90%");
+        echo '<p><b>The rejected test results queue is empty.</b></p>',"\n";
         echo html_frame_end("&nbsp;");         
     }
     else
     {
         //help
         echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 
cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n";
-        echo "<p>This is the list of Rejected Test Results waiting for 
re-submition or deletion.</p>\n";
+        echo "<p>This is the list of rejected test results waiting for 
re-submission or deletion.</p>\n";
         echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you 
can delete or edit and re-submit it into \n";
-        echo "the AppDB .<br>\n";
+        echo "the AppDB.<br>\n";
         echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";
 
-        $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Rejected Testing Results");
+        $oTest->ShowListofTests($hResult,"Rejected test results");
     }
 }
 apidb_footer();       


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