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[David comments:] I ask, did consideration of this phenomenon that you hold as a central condition of the beginning of your paper to affect the quality of the responses that were given to you? The answer, at least as *I* see it is a clear and unequivocal "Yes." However, was this considered in the interpretation of the data. It does not seem that way. It seems that all answers are taken exactly at face value without the consideration of other factors that may lead to a response.

I would like to change that to read...

David comments:] I ask, did consideration of this phenomenon that is held as a central condition of the beginning affect the reception of the question and the way that responses that were given to you? The answer, at least as *I* see it is a clear and unequivocal "Yes." However, was this considered in the interpretation of the data? It does not seem that way. It seems that all answers are taken exactly at face value without the consideration of other factors that may lead to a response.

notable changes:
1: omitted extraneous "to" in sentence one that made it unclear
2: rewrote parts of sentence one

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David Dittmann
In 2002, less than one thousand persons, worldwide, died because of terrorism; while in India, ten thousand persons died from venomous snakes.


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