Paid placement at bottom of products section of today's Macintouch:

"Witango gives you everything for rapid development of Web applications�"

For those who find my posts to be too critical, its just my nature, but
this tag line is not strong enough.

* "gives you everything"  -- what does that mean?
* Target audience would probably get the acronym RAD, to save some space

Sidebar, paid listing shows:

"Witango!
Get a powerful, efficient, complete Rapid Application Development
environment for creating the best web applications."

*  "for creating the best web applications" -- wouldn't pass legal at
most US enterprises;


I don't know what the hook is, and I'm glad to see a marketing program
getting rolled out.  But I just think these need some more work.


Bill Conlon

To the Point
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Palo Alto, CA 94306

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